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Blown Away

You stole the colour from my face
With greyness you'd replace

You took the sparkle from my eyes
I now see dark visions of my own demise

You ripped the warmth from my smile
Despite my constant attempts to beguile

You stifled my libido and passion
Showing absolutely no compassion

You strangled the beating of my heart
You snapped and broke my heart apart

Your theft of my very soul
Left a dark, soul shaped hole

You treated me badly, always too rough
You said I could never be good enough

You complained, I never blew you away
With those two shotgun blasts, you finally got your way
Written by David_Macleod (14397816)
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