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- - - THE MINX AND THE SERPENT - - -
I spied her bathing in the garden of Eden
Alone, she looked so eager to be caught naked
Moist and wanting just a little bit of sin
So, I took my fruit and bounced it off her chin
"Where hath Adam gone?"
Eve asks.
"Oh, my minx, do not fret
He is but entertaining
Fantasies of death."
Eden took my fruit in her hand, admiring
The meat of the matter, enticing, veiny and thick
Holds her in thrall in God's chosen paradise
While I slid my wicked hand upward to her thighs
"Who are you, stranger?"
She asks
"Oh, my minx, do not fret
I am but the temptation
Fantasies of sin."
And with that, Eve took my into her mouth
To chew the flesh and to suckle on the juices
This Eden, picturesque, heavenly and pure
Became a bed of damnation and fornication
And the snake did slide
To vaginal delights
Serpentine 'tween her thighs
Adam failed to reach those peaks
But the devil did just fine
(c) 2016 Frank Green
Written for the Naughty Bible Stories comp
Published 26th Apr 2016
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26th Apr 2016 8:34pm
Darkest Lord Hades I knew if anyone would be in the know about what really went down in the garden you would be..
love this sinfully delicious tale..
love Crimsin
love this sinfully delicious tale..
love Crimsin
26th Apr 2016 9:52pm
Thank you, dearest Crim. Anyone who's tasted sin knows what went down in the garden.
26th Apr 2016 9:08pm
Good imaginative alternative interpretation of what went on in the Garden. Liked this in the competition. Perhaps the incident with the forbidden fruit followed on - the devil having already got Eve on more than speaking terms with him.
26th Apr 2016 9:55pm
Thank you, my friend. We may never know whether the apple was really a fruit or something else entirely. It's up to our beliefs to interpret the meaning. Thanks for stopping by.
I have thought up an extended version of the rhyming caption I put to the picture when I saw it in the comp:
The Devil was a horny guy.
Eve took him in, under his lie,
As he enticed her with words sly.
His hands and "snake with but one eye"
Gave pleasure, she could not deny.
She hoped Adam would not espy
This first act of adultery;
This was breaking the reason why
She was made initially.
STOP PRESS: I have grown more lines for this, so I will in time post it on DUP, acknowledged as inspired by this poem and its accompanying pic. BTW - were I the pic's artist intending to portray Eve in Eden I would give the girl longer hair on her head - there were no hairstylists in Eden to give her that Meg Ryan effect.
The Devil was a horny guy.
Eve took him in, under his lie,
As he enticed her with words sly.
His hands and "snake with but one eye"
Gave pleasure, she could not deny.
She hoped Adam would not espy
This first act of adultery;
This was breaking the reason why
She was made initially.
STOP PRESS: I have grown more lines for this, so I will in time post it on DUP, acknowledged as inspired by this poem and its accompanying pic. BTW - were I the pic's artist intending to portray Eve in Eden I would give the girl longer hair on her head - there were no hairstylists in Eden to give her that Meg Ryan effect.
3rd May 2016 6:59pm
Above the alluring scene, the dialog is highly clever and engaging...leaving my lips stained by fruitful deceit, and my mind enchanted for how the Serpent's tongue felt. Masterful crafting! - blue angel
"He is but entertaining
Fantasies of death."
~
"I am but the temptation
Fantasies of sin."
"He is but entertaining
Fantasies of death."
~
"I am but the temptation
Fantasies of sin."
3rd May 2016 10:14pm
