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Let's get out of this place..
I wanna feel you while I filll you
Beat it up like I’m Trynna kill you
Lick that thang like I want to seal you
Hold you like I’m trynna steal you
Let’s run away.
Beat it up like I’m Trynna kill you
Lick that thang like I want to seal you
Hold you like I’m trynna steal you
Let’s run away.
Published 24th Apr 2016
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2018 11:02pm
I love this. Beat it up like I'm trying to kill you...hmmm. I could come up with something else but I get it just the same. It's just THAT serious with that stroke, huh? I'm not mad at that at all. Love the metaphors and flow. I like how the last line doesn't rhyme but is still a part of the piece and brings it all together along with the title.
