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Pitter Patter Pitter Patter
The sound I heard as the rain,
Came down,
It seemed to drown,
All the sound,
I wish for the day I will no longer be bound,
By certain agreements,
That don't seem to compliment,
Much has been done,
Most according to plan,
What if I ran,
All these burdens will be gone,
I can finally be in my zone.
Came down,
It seemed to drown,
All the sound,
I wish for the day I will no longer be bound,
By certain agreements,
That don't seem to compliment,
Much has been done,
Most according to plan,
What if I ran,
All these burdens will be gone,
I can finally be in my zone.
Published 17th Apr 2016
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19th Apr 2016 2:03pm
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
21st Apr 2016 12:31pm
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Anonymous
4th May 2016 1:29am
Welcome to DU Yonko!! I really luv this descriptive write......I hear the rain echoing thoughts.......I wonder if we ran if our chains that hold us truly break free or do they forever bind our souls.....even thru happiness that we eventually run to.....thought provoking write......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
5th May 2016 7:44pm
I'm glad you like it.. Im just starting though. I started to write a few days before i joined.. It's not even a month now . Gimme a few pointers from time to time
Anonymous
13th May 2016 3:43am
OH Yonko......you don't need "pointers".......you're really good.....just remember......write as YOU! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
