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Colorless boy
Everything about him was gray
His hair
His smoke
His dreams
He saw in black and white
White walls
Black shadows
White screens
Everything moved in slow motion
His life
His heart
His screams
Life always felt like it was falling
The waves
The leaves
Teenage esteem
His hair
His smoke
His dreams
He saw in black and white
White walls
Black shadows
White screens
Everything moved in slow motion
His life
His heart
His screams
Life always felt like it was falling
The waves
The leaves
Teenage esteem
Published 8th Apr 2016
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9th Apr 2016 6:50am
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5th Jan 2021 1:07am
Interesting use of flow and meter here, colors have an anchoring effect on the psyche, sensitively rendered. Noticed it's been a long time since you've posted anything when I clicked on your catalogue of writes. Hope you'll feel inspired again.
In kindness,
Daniel
In kindness,
Daniel
21st May 2024 3:06am
