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I can go months without seeing lovers. Best friends are different
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Noah: 10 articles read on compersion. Prior to this: 20 punchlines writ on a meme, on the fly (The riposte one. Also, damn my weakness for smart women who can kill me and are not available. Did it for a college ex in case the wordplay wasn't obvious on fb. She's married now, new mom) several pieces written today, only a few posted, after both jobs... I missed the Sunday-Monday setting my mind right sessions, every component. So now my energy crackles like a Jacob's ladder. Even the idle hands wish they could turn your feet to jelly, exchange energy and reach stasis. Damn. This should've been an email. In the old days I'd be the dork sending a post card to his best friend who's on vacation. My harmony balance misses you. Goodnight.
Pirate Queen: Miss you too hope you have a goodnight :-)
Noah: 10 articles read on compersion. Prior to this: 20 punchlines writ on a meme, on the fly (The riposte one. Also, damn my weakness for smart women who can kill me and are not available. Did it for a college ex in case the wordplay wasn't obvious on fb. She's married now, new mom) several pieces written today, only a few posted, after both jobs... I missed the Sunday-Monday setting my mind right sessions, every component. So now my energy crackles like a Jacob's ladder. Even the idle hands wish they could turn your feet to jelly, exchange energy and reach stasis. Damn. This should've been an email. In the old days I'd be the dork sending a post card to his best friend who's on vacation. My harmony balance misses you. Goodnight.
Pirate Queen: Miss you too hope you have a goodnight :-)
Published 6th Apr 2016
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Fleeting thoughts but they're brilliant Loki. Both your talent and erudition are clear.
"My harmony balance misses you."
Maybe a collaboration with Pirate Queen would be in order? Meanwhile, excellent work. This one stands alone.
"My harmony balance misses you."
Maybe a collaboration with Pirate Queen would be in order? Meanwhile, excellent work. This one stands alone.
We're working on starting a history podcast presently... She's so very private about her written work.
More comfortable with being utterly naked with me, than being completely bare. Weird pattern with friends and lovers I've found and so often I have to not tell them the link to this or add them on Facebook just so they don't hear/read so much of Loki as to get intimidated and then hold back their personal writing. I don't follow it really, but whenever I just show my words tumbling out haphazardly (or just let them appear to be so) reception is open, the vulnerability is embraced. When I open the dome and let the current flow is when hesitance kicks in and I end up with a quiet audience. So I am learning to balance that, especially when connecting with someone who has soooo much to share.
More comfortable with being utterly naked with me, than being completely bare. Weird pattern with friends and lovers I've found and so often I have to not tell them the link to this or add them on Facebook just so they don't hear/read so much of Loki as to get intimidated and then hold back their personal writing. I don't follow it really, but whenever I just show my words tumbling out haphazardly (or just let them appear to be so) reception is open, the vulnerability is embraced. When I open the dome and let the current flow is when hesitance kicks in and I end up with a quiet audience. So I am learning to balance that, especially when connecting with someone who has soooo much to share.
