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Lost
Lost in time
Alone and scared
No one to hold or call my own
My past is following me.
Darkness surrounding me
Thriving on the strength I lack
So cold and never ending.
I keep running
No where left to go
Can't let it find me
It's so close.
Yet comforting me some disturbing way...
Causing so much pain and hurt
If I end it now and let it win
There would finally be peace
That bridge would finally be burnt.
Alone and scared
No one to hold or call my own
My past is following me.
Darkness surrounding me
Thriving on the strength I lack
So cold and never ending.
I keep running
No where left to go
Can't let it find me
It's so close.
Yet comforting me some disturbing way...
Causing so much pain and hurt
If I end it now and let it win
There would finally be peace
That bridge would finally be burnt.
Published 7th Jul 2011
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2011 4:37am
I'm not convinced that you've made it over that bridge yet. Don't burn it until you do. This was great, Dawn. I'm digging your introspection. Yet again you meld emotion and words seamlessly. Well done.
7th Jul 2011 5:19am
Ok I'm almost over it, :) thanks for always having some positive feed back it's much appreciated
Anonymous
7th Jul 2011 7:18am
I figured you were already half way or more. Good for you! ^_^
I try to be positive whenever possible. If there's something I clearly need to critique, I will mention it in comments. If its complete shite, most likely I won't comment, but if I do, I'll PM you about it and attempt to be constructive with my critique rather than judgmental. Nothing I've read of yours has been anything but great. Keep up the good work, Dawn!
I try to be positive whenever possible. If there's something I clearly need to critique, I will mention it in comments. If its complete shite, most likely I won't comment, but if I do, I'll PM you about it and attempt to be constructive with my critique rather than judgmental. Nothing I've read of yours has been anything but great. Keep up the good work, Dawn!
