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Til The End
The wind that caught his sails
- was the wind that took my breath away
Life was like a wave at times
- rough and hard to balance ourselves
Firmly standing our ground
- we managed to stay together til the end
- was the wind that took my breath away
Life was like a wave at times
- rough and hard to balance ourselves
Firmly standing our ground
- we managed to stay together til the end
Published 28th Mar 2016
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28th Mar 2016 11:11pm
Short and absolutely to the point, Tommie, is this
poem which tell the tale of love evermore. Doesn't
get much better than this. It is simple in its common
ground, but simple does not diminish its strong
message. Applause. Take bow . . .
poem which tell the tale of love evermore. Doesn't
get much better than this. It is simple in its common
ground, but simple does not diminish its strong
message. Applause. Take bow . . .
29th Mar 2016 1:30am
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29th Mar 2016 6:15am
Sailing into the sunset - could also imagine you like one of the Brit girls that took part in a recent transatlantic race.
29th Mar 2016 12:34pm
