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Everything
my heart was everything -
i gave everything away
everything is there -
in the passage between
your eye's and yourself -
and where i stand
the thought of me -
chases in your own mind
and my heart -
is your everything
i gave everything away
everything is there -
in the passage between
your eye's and yourself -
and where i stand
the thought of me -
chases in your own mind
and my heart -
is your everything
Published 28th Mar 2016
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29th Mar 2016 1:33am
28th Mar 2016 8:00pm
this is very sweet, tommie. Sometimes I think the heart remembers and records just as much as the brain.
29th Mar 2016 1:34am
28th Mar 2016 9:28pm
Tommie, I enjoy how unequivocally you write in this piece, Resolute you are in your use of "everything." Reel back a few pieces of your heart for yourself.
29th Mar 2016 1:35am
31st Mar 2016 9:39pm
Such an endearing and unselfish thought process
within the lines of this cool poem, Tommie.
within the lines of this cool poem, Tommie.
29th Mar 2016 1:36am
29th Mar 2016 1:58am
love easily causes us to give something as precious as a heart.
wonderful work, Tommie...
wonderful work, Tommie...
29th Mar 2016 3:29am
29th Mar 2016 6:49pm
29th Mar 2016 11:19pm
