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Sonnet - Vixen
Dripping with pure carnal energy,
The vixen is a thing of pure desire;
She has achieved such sensual mastery
Her passion is a roaring, ravenous fire.
My trembling fingers o'er her perfect skin,
The hunger in that awe-inspiring smirk,
The way she seizes me, and pulls me in,
Whispers in my ear to get to work...
..It's almost too addictive -- too intense
Attraction so much more than chemistry,
Almost frightening, pleasure so immense,
She drives me past the point of ecstasy.
Her appetite a lust so unrestrained,
It cannot be controlled, nor e'er contained.
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The vixen is a thing of pure desire;
She has achieved such sensual mastery
Her passion is a roaring, ravenous fire.
My trembling fingers o'er her perfect skin,
The hunger in that awe-inspiring smirk,
The way she seizes me, and pulls me in,
Whispers in my ear to get to work...
..It's almost too addictive -- too intense
Attraction so much more than chemistry,
Almost frightening, pleasure so immense,
She drives me past the point of ecstasy.
Her appetite a lust so unrestrained,
It cannot be controlled, nor e'er contained.
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Published 21st Mar 2016
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21st Mar 2016 9:04pm
I joined this site just to tell you that I LOVE this. Thank you for sharing it.
21st Mar 2016 9:05pm
21st Mar 2016 11:55pm
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22nd Mar 2016 1:56am
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22nd Mar 2016 2:45am
"Her passion is a roaring, ravenous fire."
I sit fanning, feeding the flames.
Another scorching sonnet, well done.
~C
I sit fanning, feeding the flames.
Another scorching sonnet, well done.
~C
I also joined this site for this poem. It's VERY beautiful piece. I am moved by the spot on expression of sensuality. The author paints a great picture of how it can be when the woman is the more experienced, more aggressive and/or older in age. ( could apply to people of all ages.) But a true vixen is always longing for a man to take control. I DO NOT refer to DOM/SUB. I mean her true match. Always longing for that mature and confident lover. The ONE that speaks only though his intentions and actions. He "beds her and bests" her. Even a Vixen longs for her "APEX LOVER", LOL!
I'd love to read more from this author.
I'd love to read more from this author.
