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16th Mar 2016 9:38pm
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17th Mar 2016 11:48pm
16th Mar 2016 10:30pm
Beautiful two line poem, baby. The concept of knocking on your heart is truly clever and sweet. Too many folks arm theirs with an impenetrable security system. Loved this Tommie!
17th Mar 2016 11:49pm
17th Mar 2016 9:07pm
There was an English comedian called Tommy Cannon whose stage partner's catchphrase was 'Rock on, Tommy'. In your case the verse could be summed up (comma optional) "Knock on Tommi'.
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18th Mar 2016 2:51am
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21st Mar 2016 8:48pm
Tommie, I envision this as a sultry whisper, an intimate invitation to share your inner sanctum. The idea of awaking inside is breathtaking. Brava sexy lady!
23rd Mar 2016 2:12am
