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I Should Have Died
I should have died.
In the wreck that nearly took my life.
Still I wonder why I'm alive.
Sometimes I wish I would have died.
That wreck changed my life.
Because I should have died.
In the wreck that nearly took my life.
Still I wonder why I'm alive.
Sometimes I wish I would have died.
That wreck changed my life.
Because I should have died.
Published 14th Mar 2016
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Anonymous
15th Mar 2016 12:29pm
My precious friend.......your deeds on this earth are not yet fulfilled......God will reveal His purpose in time of why your life has been spared that day......someone in this life time needs you to be here......you're a precious soul......I'm glad you're still here my friend......sending you luv & hugs xo :)
24th Mar 2016 9:15pm
Baby. God put you on this Earth for a reason. He has a plan for your life. I love you. :)
1st Apr 2016 7:03am
28th Apr 2016 3:43am
this is a really powerful piece. The repetition works very well to impart the life changing nature of the event, how everything stops in a moment of trauma.
And yes, you are most certainly alive for a reason, you're writing, you're processing, you're bringing art and beauty to the world and I know that without knowing anything else about you!
And yes, you are most certainly alive for a reason, you're writing, you're processing, you're bringing art and beauty to the world and I know that without knowing anything else about you!
3rd Jul 2016 2:19am
