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A downward Spiral
They say I'm in a downward spiral
And this is how it begins
Showing no regret on the surface
Because that's how I feel from within
The thought of you brightening it
Makes me feel that it's dim
And how are you my teacher
If all you can teach me is sin?
And this is how it begins
Showing no regret on the surface
Because that's how I feel from within
The thought of you brightening it
Makes me feel that it's dim
And how are you my teacher
If all you can teach me is sin?
Published 3rd Jul 2011
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3rd Jul 2011 3:49am
This one flows really well. And leaves you thinking, that's always a good sign! ;)
3rd Jul 2011 3:51am
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