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Lie
Lie
Lie with me
Tell me you love me
I値l tell you I love you too
Lie with me
Tell me you値l always love me
I値l tell you my love is for ever
Lie with me
Tell me there will be no other
I promise to be totally faithful
Lie with me
Tell me You will always want me
Because I will always want you
Lie with me
Promise you値l never hurt me
Because I will never hurt you
Lie with me
You lied with me
I lied with you
You池e a lying cheating lowlife bitch
I知 a lying cheating lowlife bastard
Lie with me
Tell me you love me
I値l tell you I love you too
Lie with me
Tell me you値l always love me
I値l tell you my love is for ever
Lie with me
Tell me there will be no other
I promise to be totally faithful
Lie with me
Tell me You will always want me
Because I will always want you
Lie with me
Promise you値l never hurt me
Because I will never hurt you
Lie with me
You lied with me
I lied with you
You池e a lying cheating lowlife bitch
I知 a lying cheating lowlife bastard
Published 1st Mar 2016
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2nd Mar 2016 00:24am
Oh, that made my head spin... I need to lie down....
Very clever, or is that cleaver?
JJ
Very clever, or is that cleaver?
JJ
2nd Mar 2016 5:00pm
LOL - made me want to lie down too - it could be cleaver but that would be a very different poem with a very different ending :-)
thank you as always for reading and commenting :-)
thank you as always for reading and commenting :-)
2nd Mar 2016 1:56am
Wow interesting us of the word lie and the context for which it was presented...very creative play with words...I enjoyed the read...guess two liars lie best together when lying in unison
2nd Mar 2016 4:59pm
yep two liars are better than one and in that context deserve each other :-)
thank you for reading and commenting - keeps me going :-)
thank you for reading and commenting - keeps me going :-)
