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Limbo
Stuck in limbo
Motionless under such a low bar
I call it no mans land, because
We're not sure who we are
It's when you want to live
Although, death stands in the distance
Asphalt wastelands, your body you'll give
Taking no notice of lights
Or metal that roars
Still,
Small hope exists it's a miss
I wonder if it hurts when death gives you a kiss
Motionless under such a low bar
I call it no mans land, because
We're not sure who we are
It's when you want to live
Although, death stands in the distance
Asphalt wastelands, your body you'll give
Taking no notice of lights
Or metal that roars
Still,
Small hope exists it's a miss
I wonder if it hurts when death gives you a kiss
Published 25th Feb 2016
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25th Feb 2016 7:01pm
really like the idea behind this S1 is so good, I want more from this tho...death is easy...it's the living an knowing your living in limbo that's hurts so much
the metaphor of the road tho is clever...liked that to :)
the metaphor of the road tho is clever...liked that to :)
