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Cougar's Forest
Cougar’s Forest
He rode the kitty into her bushes
She led him through her rain forest
Her eyes reflected her home
Green like the trees in rainforests
Unlike the others that entered
He came with different intentions
Some trees burned down by forest fires
Others cut down to their britches
He came to plant a new seed
Deep in her forest a tree
Growing high in her jungle
Deep thick dark brown it would be
He shared the good news with her
She stopped hugged him tight filled with glee
She looked at him full green eyes
Said hurry cum follow me
He jumped back on and he rode
to the deepest part of her home
Where she lay and she played
at the top was her throne
Their he touched and he felt
her inner parts her soul
he gave her the seed as promised
buried deep like gold
between the thighs of her jungle
was her home where she roamed
So glad he came with her
beautiful eyes green as they glowed
Not to be mistaken as a cougar or a leopard for a jaguar she was
fierce on the surface but inside had a heart filled with love
They parted for some time
He left while she roamed through the pines
As time grew she craved to reconnect like a rhyme
He brought a rhythm to her jungle
that she couldn’t shake from her mind.
His seed drove her bananas her brain wild
as monkey’s swung through the vines
Her heart cries went from wines
to fire burning her eyes
How could he enter and leave
let time run and flee
Not to be mistaken as a cougar or a leopard for a jaguar she was
fierce on the surface but inside had a heart filled with love
He returned back to her entrance
all smiles full filled with seeds
“How happy she’ll be to see
what I carry with me”
Out of nowhere she pounced
on him before he could speak
She roared
frightened the man
utterly shock
left him weak
The jaguar snarled and growled
fear filled him as she showed her teeth
She stayed on top
the man stuck beneath.
She roared for she endured so much pain
but all he saw was her fangs
The man shoved the jaguar off
for his feet he did gain
He ran away no return
“Was all this work in vain?”
The jaguar tried to catch him
she only tried to explain
But the man escaped and left no trace
The jaguar dropped in shame as tears ran down her face.
Not to be mistaken as a cougar or a leopard for a jaguar she was
fierce on the surface but inside had a her heart filled with love.
He rode the kitty into her bushes
She led him through her rain forest
Her eyes reflected her home
Green like the trees in rainforests
Unlike the others that entered
He came with different intentions
Some trees burned down by forest fires
Others cut down to their britches
He came to plant a new seed
Deep in her forest a tree
Growing high in her jungle
Deep thick dark brown it would be
He shared the good news with her
She stopped hugged him tight filled with glee
She looked at him full green eyes
Said hurry cum follow me
He jumped back on and he rode
to the deepest part of her home
Where she lay and she played
at the top was her throne
Their he touched and he felt
her inner parts her soul
he gave her the seed as promised
buried deep like gold
between the thighs of her jungle
was her home where she roamed
So glad he came with her
beautiful eyes green as they glowed
Not to be mistaken as a cougar or a leopard for a jaguar she was
fierce on the surface but inside had a heart filled with love
They parted for some time
He left while she roamed through the pines
As time grew she craved to reconnect like a rhyme
He brought a rhythm to her jungle
that she couldn’t shake from her mind.
His seed drove her bananas her brain wild
as monkey’s swung through the vines
Her heart cries went from wines
to fire burning her eyes
How could he enter and leave
let time run and flee
Not to be mistaken as a cougar or a leopard for a jaguar she was
fierce on the surface but inside had a heart filled with love
He returned back to her entrance
all smiles full filled with seeds
“How happy she’ll be to see
what I carry with me”
Out of nowhere she pounced
on him before he could speak
She roared
frightened the man
utterly shock
left him weak
The jaguar snarled and growled
fear filled him as she showed her teeth
She stayed on top
the man stuck beneath.
She roared for she endured so much pain
but all he saw was her fangs
The man shoved the jaguar off
for his feet he did gain
He ran away no return
“Was all this work in vain?”
The jaguar tried to catch him
she only tried to explain
But the man escaped and left no trace
The jaguar dropped in shame as tears ran down her face.
Not to be mistaken as a cougar or a leopard for a jaguar she was
fierce on the surface but inside had a her heart filled with love.
Published 19th Feb 2016
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2018 00:36am
Is this an older woman with a younger man?
I love how this reads like a story. I love the metaphor as usual but do have some constructive criticism. There is some redundancy and even though it's metaphorical, don't allow the literal to come in where it doesn't fit. I can't place the line where you speak about monkeys...well, unless I look deeper and say that represents other women. I'll explain why later, but still, even that doesn't fit the direction the write seems to be going.
It sounds like the man bit off more than he could chew, or he could handle it but the woman was too aggressive and pushed him away despite her feelings for him. I could also interpret it as on one hand, it seems like he just wanted a good time, but she ended up wanting more than he was willing or able to give. On the other hand, shoot, it sounds like she forced herself onto him without his permission or she was hella emotional in that moment of aggression toward him that she just turned into a different person to him. He didn't know her anymore and the damage was already done to where he couldn't trust that she was who she said she is. Hmmm. I'd love to get some backstory on this one day.
I love how this reads like a story. I love the metaphor as usual but do have some constructive criticism. There is some redundancy and even though it's metaphorical, don't allow the literal to come in where it doesn't fit. I can't place the line where you speak about monkeys...well, unless I look deeper and say that represents other women. I'll explain why later, but still, even that doesn't fit the direction the write seems to be going.
It sounds like the man bit off more than he could chew, or he could handle it but the woman was too aggressive and pushed him away despite her feelings for him. I could also interpret it as on one hand, it seems like he just wanted a good time, but she ended up wanting more than he was willing or able to give. On the other hand, shoot, it sounds like she forced herself onto him without his permission or she was hella emotional in that moment of aggression toward him that she just turned into a different person to him. He didn't know her anymore and the damage was already done to where he couldn't trust that she was who she said she is. Hmmm. I'd love to get some backstory on this one day.
