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Wake Up
I'm kinda confused we're categorized as human beings. However we're mammals like a house pet & etc. Just like they have different breeds ours are different races. Do we not all feel emotions, do we not all need food to survive, do we not all have sex & etc. So tell me exactly truly wat is all these labels for??? Technically none of us was here 1st so who truly is the aliens. Yes I know 🌎 is the planet I reside but technically I live in space which is where earth resides the only difference is gravity!!!
Published 19th Feb 2016
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19th Feb 2016 10:57am
20th Feb 2016 11:03pm
I do like this piece..and part of its message though logic is slightly flawed...but why enter it in comps that it has nothing to do with? The comps are to challenge you to use thoughts you might not normally have....not label yourself....mine was to create a unique character...D's a LGBT comp...how does this fit those...stop being so offended...and just write what you feel and matters to you. You dont own feelings or the right to them...be fair..let everyone have their own...and we would be willing for you to have yours. No ones pain..joy..sad ...mad...is any more important than the others...
C'mon....read...get to know these people before you judge...or you are no different than a biggot.
C'mon....read...get to know these people before you judge...or you are no different than a biggot.
