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I give in to thee
My sweat is real
my heart you can steal
I cannot see
I give in to thee
Burning veins
my soul rains
I want more
The fucking pay never ends
I know you will bend
to my every need
I will bow to thee
Help me not feel
make the assholes go away
theres nothing left to say
I give in to thee...
My will is torn
I wish I was never born
This shit is madness gone wild
I will always give in to thee...
I know where you stay
your hearts astray
dealers never go away
They know the powers that be
and that I will always give in to thee...
my heart you can steal
I cannot see
I give in to thee
Burning veins
my soul rains
I want more
The fucking pay never ends
I know you will bend
to my every need
I will bow to thee
Help me not feel
make the assholes go away
theres nothing left to say
I give in to thee...
My will is torn
I wish I was never born
This shit is madness gone wild
I will always give in to thee...
I know where you stay
your hearts astray
dealers never go away
They know the powers that be
and that I will always give in to thee...
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Re. I give in to thee
13th Feb 2016 1:31am
giving in or
getting out
it's difficult
either way...
but either
way it's a
very good
poem...
getting out
it's difficult
either way...
but either
way it's a
very good
poem...
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Re: Re. I give in to thee
13th Feb 2016 1:50am
Re. I give in to thee
13th Feb 2016 8:14am
so it drags you to the shadows
where the bad things can't find you.
it's eventful poetry...
where the bad things can't find you.
it's eventful poetry...
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Re. I give in to thee
13th Feb 2016 12:00pm
It's a fight many fight
I pray that you prevail
hate the darkness without light
don't give in, n' you can't fail...
Adore u my dear :)
I pray that you prevail
hate the darkness without light
don't give in, n' you can't fail...
Adore u my dear :)
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Re: Re. I give in to thee
14th Feb 2016 4:41pm
I adore you as well, my sweet. This is just a reminder of what once was....<3
Re. I give in to thee
13th Feb 2016 12:23pm
Re: Re. I give in to thee
14th Feb 2016 4:43pm
Re: Re. I give in to thee
17th Feb 2016 2:55am
If you can re-engineer your brain to be unchained, you can make yourself into anything.
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Re. I give in to thee
13th Feb 2016 7:21pm
Next time you see her, tell her I miss her. Though something tells me she will not be allowed o leave the cage of snow that has frozen around her. Perhaps she can find a pair of ski's to glide back down the freshly fallen powder to the warmth at the bottom of the mountain...
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Re: Re. I give in to thee
14th Feb 2016 4:44pm
Love your take in this JJ. She is well, now. <3 Shes just lookin back. Sometimes we have to to know that we much keep going forward....
Re. I give in to thee
14th Feb 2016 12:06pm
Re: Re. I give in to thee
14th Feb 2016 4:43pm
Once upon a time, D. Just makin sure I never go there there again....<3