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Anonymous
8th Feb 2016 8:31pm
goodness gracious! i am in total envy of your brevity and how well you do these. well done!
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15th Feb 2016 6:19pm
Thank you so much, Minerva! I feel honored by your kind words since we both know that you are damn good at haikus :-)!
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2016 00:00am
Miss Chi. . .this trinket is far from "empty". . .Beautiful job, Lady. . .~xo, Devlin.
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15th Feb 2016 6:23pm
Thank you so much, Devlin! Love your comment! I try to keep the trinket at least half full :-).
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9th Feb 2016 00:54am
....when emptiness is even emptier....
.....you are just so amazing with short ink that's powerful in message....
.....you are just so amazing with short ink that's powerful in message....
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15th Feb 2016 6:21pm
Rain, what a refreshing compliment! Thank you! I often try to write a longer poem. And when it's ready I just erase all syllables except of 17. My way to do haikus :-).
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9th Feb 2016 10:50am
Wow... That was the equivalent to
crescent kick to cranium!! Yup, Rain
nailed it, you are a "Master at Brevity" :)
crescent kick to cranium!! Yup, Rain
nailed it, you are a "Master at Brevity" :)
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It's good to at least present your words nicely if you're uncommunicative :-)!
Thanks, Poe!
Thanks, Poe!
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24th Feb 2016 11:52am