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founder of a stream
she is rain
heavens muse for rebirth
i am a stream
a vein collective
of her fluid strength
that spurs me down
the valley in the arms
of the mountains
she is my resource
in her sustenance lies
a depth of growth
that empowers change
she is not content
to let me be
she urges me to become
i want to become
i am becoming
i am a river
Published 4th Feb 2016
| Edited 26th May 2016
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A metaphorically empowering piece---to be certain!
Symbolically, water has so frequently come to represent that which sustains life....and your creative representation of its cycle, together with your lovely line and striking imagery, pay such a heart-felt tribute to honor a very special individual..... who brings so much encouragement into the poet's--( perhaps, your own ) life!
I am ever so glad to see you posting again, mo Chara chotha`imid! xo
Inspiring Ink...Indeed!!!
Symbolically, water has so frequently come to represent that which sustains life....and your creative representation of its cycle, together with your lovely line and striking imagery, pay such a heart-felt tribute to honor a very special individual..... who brings so much encouragement into the poet's--( perhaps, your own ) life!
I am ever so glad to see you posting again, mo Chara chotha`imid! xo
Inspiring Ink...Indeed!!!
26th May 2016 11:53am
Just wandering thoughts Enchantress. They're the only thoughts I can work with. Anything based on fact just won't grow. So be it Enchantress. Your eyes and thoughts always valued my dear. Thank you.
4th Feb 2016 3:05pm
26th May 2016 11:56am
Glad you're back :-).
A powerful write, as always. Hope for more deep and flowing stuff!
A powerful write, as always. Hope for more deep and flowing stuff!
26th May 2016 11:59am
It flows as it goes Miss Chi. Your thoughts always looked for. Thank you as always. xo
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Very kind words K. It's nice when the mind is moving the right way to express feeling clearly. A rare time. Thanks for dropping by. You are appreciated.
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20th Dec 2016 5:07am
Thank you for the kind words Miss D. A reaction any poet would be happy with. 😋
5th Oct 2016 6:53pm
Your words flow calmly filling and soothing in our chaos of struggle. Absolutely beautiful, I love imthe imagery. Respectfully,
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12th Mar 2018 2:44am
A beautiful flow, I loved how this poem travelled
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