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Suicide
I hear your comments.
Your words echo through the halls.
They echo through my lifeless body,
as I lay there taking my last breath.
You could of stopped this fate.
Instead you ignored my agonizing cries.
You sliced me open and made me vulnerable.
Your words were untruthful,
yet everyone believed you.
I cried.
They laughed.
I still hear the whispers even though I am gone.
Will you miss me?
Will you regret everything you said about me?
Or will you move on and find a new victim?
Even though I sliced my wrists,
you killed me long ago.
It all started with the comments,
I heard echo through the halls.
Your words echo through the halls.
They echo through my lifeless body,
as I lay there taking my last breath.
You could of stopped this fate.
Instead you ignored my agonizing cries.
You sliced me open and made me vulnerable.
Your words were untruthful,
yet everyone believed you.
I cried.
They laughed.
I still hear the whispers even though I am gone.
Will you miss me?
Will you regret everything you said about me?
Or will you move on and find a new victim?
Even though I sliced my wrists,
you killed me long ago.
It all started with the comments,
I heard echo through the halls.
Published 30th Jan 2016
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30th Jan 2016 9:27pm
This is a sad heartwrenching write.
Public humiliation and cruelty should not every be tolerated.
Well told and written. I just hope
that you have not been someone's
victim. Btw welcome to the du
there are many supportive people here.
Keith
Public humiliation and cruelty should not every be tolerated.
Well told and written. I just hope
that you have not been someone's
victim. Btw welcome to the du
there are many supportive people here.
Keith
30th Jan 2016 11:32pm
Kalli,
You've written something striking and honest. I've heard those whispers echo through the halls; I've heard them grow louder, until they were deafening. Please know you aren't alone. The community is here for you.
I think this write did a good job of setting a mood. It felt like a raw, powerful introduction to you as both a writer and person, and I think it will be relatable and helpful to many people.
Welcome,
A.I.
You've written something striking and honest. I've heard those whispers echo through the halls; I've heard them grow louder, until they were deafening. Please know you aren't alone. The community is here for you.
I think this write did a good job of setting a mood. It felt like a raw, powerful introduction to you as both a writer and person, and I think it will be relatable and helpful to many people.
Welcome,
A.I.
