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Sea Quest: A Dream
Sea Quest: A Dream
My love and I were on a Caribbean cruise. She jumped off the side of the ship, not to die, but to find something in the sea. The water was calm and warm so I swam underwater in search of her. I found her. She was jubilant. There were shipwrecks under the water where we were swimming. She was hugging a big doll when I found her underwater. I embraced her and swam up to the surface holding her. We boarded the ship again. She was wearing a green dress which was dripping wet from the ocean swim. I led her to the dining area. The people there all welcomed us. They hugged us together. She was gleeful. It felt like coming home. I rejoiced to have her safely back from her sea quest.
My love and I were on a Caribbean cruise. She jumped off the side of the ship, not to die, but to find something in the sea. The water was calm and warm so I swam underwater in search of her. I found her. She was jubilant. There were shipwrecks under the water where we were swimming. She was hugging a big doll when I found her underwater. I embraced her and swam up to the surface holding her. We boarded the ship again. She was wearing a green dress which was dripping wet from the ocean swim. I led her to the dining area. The people there all welcomed us. They hugged us together. She was gleeful. It felt like coming home. I rejoiced to have her safely back from her sea quest.
Published 29th Jan 2016
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29th Jan 2016 8:14pm
It's beautiful and i love you for the kind of beauty you show me. A perfect dream...calm exotic unique sexy and joyful....you. You are my doll. I love you and you are my dream in flesh....
Jennifer.....⭐🐷🐸⭐
Jennifer.....⭐🐷🐸⭐
29th Jan 2016 8:29pm
It gives me the most delicious pleasure to show you beauty my love. You are all my happy dreams put together. You are the woman I'd jump into the sea to rescue. I wrap my arms around you and hold you in life's sea. I am your safe harbor in life's storms. We are one in the same.
Love you always,
John
Love you always,
John
29th Jan 2016 9:23pm
Dont tempt me...i might jump just for the feel of you ...💝 you make all my seas bearable. I love you John.
I smiled so big because I braced for ink from a long-winded pen. No way would I be so lucky to read a new poem of yours of ephemeral length, twice in one day. :) Lucky Friday! Yay me!
A lovely dream John, I was pleased with the notion that even in soaked garments, wet hair matted to face, the two of you still enjoyed the beautiful moment, making new memories at dinner. Nicely done sir…
A lovely dream John, I was pleased with the notion that even in soaked garments, wet hair matted to face, the two of you still enjoyed the beautiful moment, making new memories at dinner. Nicely done sir…
29th Jan 2016 10:23pm
Rain I'm peach cobbler happy to read your reply. I'm happy as a rooster crowing you enjoyed this. Thank you so much. ;-)
John
John
29th Jan 2016 9:50pm
What a great story. So easy to read it drags me right in.
Not to die. Glee! Rejoice!
Yay! :)
Not to die. Glee! Rejoice!
Yay! :)
29th Jan 2016 10:23pm
