Lady on the Bus

Your emotion bought back some very powerful memories. Thank you.  
 
Bus lady, alone and seat corner anxious,  
horrors of Cairo, or introductions.  
We intrude-troduce. What do you do?  
She says “40 years in a box”  
A gasp, a gag, a sneeze of Soul,
fake laughter coughing tears.  
Denial.  
Palpable silence. Gold-watch vista.

Excellent  poetic reply my friend. I appreciate the powerful memories my poem revived for you. Thanks for reading.

John

Language bubbles from his lips
He woos her with jelly bean words

Awe what a wonderful capture my lover man....
She frowns
My muscles clench

Love that image as i exit your words...
His affection and her repelling...i think i would have felt the same....i really love this...

I really love you...i am made breathless just thinking of us...forever my pet...
Jennifer

Oh yes I felt like intervening, coming to her assistance. It was a strong primal feeling. Thank you for reading my love. You and me forever.
John

I love the changes...the pebbles of her spine...bending like cat tails...this is quite breathtaking in its brevity...the rejection a blow...
Really strong write ..
You are the beat of my heart John..
Your Mistress and tight keeper loves you with soul intensity...you are the part of me i have been looking for my whole life. You are the final piece to my jigsaw life...lol...the corners of my new smile.
Love you forever baby.
Jennifer

You have planted suns in me to warm my body and soul. Your voice, heard in your email, melts me into sugar. You melt my gold into pools of hot passionate wealth of love. You fill me with the reality of love.

I'm very happy you enjoyed my changes on this  poem darling.

I love that I fit the last piece of your jigsaw puzzle of life. You are the final DNA in my double helix of life. You make me into a new man. ;-)

Love you into the great beyond,
John

...that was such a vivid and descriptive delivery, John. Conveyance so crisp, that I could actually see myself riding the bus, watching this story unfold. Love it! Ink Respect!

Thank you so much Rain. I love knowing my conveyance was crisp. I tried to hone away the redundancy in this one. I plum happy you enjoyed this. ;-)

John

a little drama on a wayward bus;
it's in her eyes.
nice delivery...

Thanks John. It certainly was unexpected drama Thanks for reading. :)

John

Language bubbles from his lips  
He woos her with jelly bean words  
She laughs and grabs his tentacles     ...

Loved these lines.

There's a bit of serendipity to this that makes it delightful.

LobodeSanPedro, a belated thanks my friend! I love how you describe my poem. A bit of serendipity indeed. Much gratitude. :)

John