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When I see your smile
shared with all except for me
the memory hurts
(This was another one from my recently unearthed high school archives. I distinctly remember writing it, and it brings back so much...)
Published 26th Jan 2016
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30th Jan 2016 8:50pm
1st Feb 2016 5:29pm
.....it does seem to sting when you reflect on being the reason for their smile,....only to realize they're smiling with someone else....
19th Feb 2016 00:14am
And that hurt is genuine and most pronounced, I think, in our adolescence. Brava!
