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"A Lover's Kiss"

A lover's kiss
Forever may it stay upon my lips.
A sweet reminder - a bid farewell
A lover's kiss.
Remembering, inspiring, gratifying, embracing
A lover's kiss.
The unspoken 'I love you'
Respect, understanding, love make the cup runneth over.
A child, a daughter, a girlfriend missed
Her smile and laugh, never shall they cease
A lover's kiss.
For an eternity let it live in all our hearts.
A lover's kiss
Forever may it stay upon my lips.

Written by Pho3nix19xx

Published 25th Jan 2016

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Re. "A Lover's Kiss"

wallyroo92

25th Jan 2016 3:59pm

Nicely done. The repetition flows naturally and nicely.
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Re. "A Lover's Kiss"

Pho3nix19xx

25th Jan 2016 4:26pm

Thanks wally, I actually entered this poem into a poetry contest when I was in high school and had it published in an anthology,
This poem was very hard for me to write as I wrote it for a girl I was dating at the time, who ended up passing away.
This was my eulogy to her.

thanks again for your comment and taking the time to read it, it really means a lot to me, especially with this one, cheers