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Mystique
it's the subtlety of you...
..that profoundly speaks
beyond the allure of your physique
...it's your mystique...
that has my inquiring mind piqued
...more than just the IT Factor
it's something extra ordinary..
..extra-sensory about you
as if you know something these
other women don't..
your mystique...standing out..
..in a crowded room..with that
gravity..compelling masculine eyes
...revolving like so many moons..
casting stares..and glances..
...wondering what are their chances..
their hopes..of getting next to you
..beyond that invisible velvet rope
you have around you..
..that undeniable aura
that surrounds you
...balanced with an earthy quality..
that grounds you..
...makes a man want to be
more than what he is..
.....just to engage you...
it's so obvious
how you got the herd envious
..giving fevers to
all the wanna be divas ...
...with their painted on skirts
and 6' stilettos that hurt like hell
..over accessorized
flaunting easy access
..trying to work the room
while you sit back
..ever so calm in your confidence
my compliments to you lady
..without saying a word..
you've taken us men to task
.i sense a high degree of
feminine intellect in effect here
..lurking behind your mask
a glimpse is all this brotha asks
..a lil somethin to go on...
you've already given me
somethin to grow on...
..just in the mere acquaintance
of your presence ...
inspiring such effervescence
...
..but i gotta be
more than just some dude
....can't be actin all subdued
if i'm to cultivate a
.....deeper mood with you..
so with all that said...
here i come..
Published 21st Jan 2016
| Edited 22nd Jan 2016
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21st Jan 2016 9:13am
At first, I thought: "Damn Naaj. Just posted a piece on the XMen!! lol
Nah, jk... Yo kid, this was a classy, sexy, jazzy lingo-listic treat for the mind's eyes, n I wouldn't be surprised if you're intended didn't
just decide to let you take a front
row seat in her heart! :) excellent ink!
Nah, jk... Yo kid, this was a classy, sexy, jazzy lingo-listic treat for the mind's eyes, n I wouldn't be surprised if you're intended didn't
just decide to let you take a front
row seat in her heart! :) excellent ink!
21st Jan 2016 12:11pm
Oooh....nice.....she must be something else!
This is such a respectful wooing, I would imagine you'll get what you're looking for...
Classy ink.
This is such a respectful wooing, I would imagine you'll get what you're looking for...
Classy ink.
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- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
21st Jan 2016 12:11pm
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21st Jan 2016 3:54pm
So your theme song must be "Get Ready... cause here I come now"...? :)
Go get her! Follow your heart!
Go get her! Follow your heart!
23rd Jan 2016 8:01pm
Freaking gods, this reads hypnotically.
the arrangement is soul blowing
and intense as well.
Loving the granted attentiveness, very
adoring, enlightening, and uplifting.
Someone spirit is smiling in the deeps
surely.
Beauteous being..
-Howlings
the arrangement is soul blowing
and intense as well.
Loving the granted attentiveness, very
adoring, enlightening, and uplifting.
Someone spirit is smiling in the deeps
surely.
Beauteous being..
-Howlings
30th Jan 2016 11:49am
"...And so he rose to the occasion."
Would you consider a part 2 for acquaintance? Were his assumptions confirmed or exaggerated? Where does this go?
Well enjoyed. Reading this felt like sipping good whine. Now I want a gulp
Would you consider a part 2 for acquaintance? Were his assumptions confirmed or exaggerated? Where does this go?
Well enjoyed. Reading this felt like sipping good whine. Now I want a gulp
