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I like doing impressions
You dented the grass
With your ass (_*_)
Head and shoulders
I dented deeper the grass
With your ass
and my
Hands
knees
and
toes
We left our impressions of sex
Missionary style
Finished;
We stood coyly
Admiring our indentations
Or sexual artwork
Our impressionist masterpiece
The need for a follow up
Burned in our loins
This time was different
You dented the grass
But not with your ass (_*_)
It was your
hands
knees
and
toes
And just, my feet
We kept going
despite the rain
still
there was no smell
of wet dog
finished;
we walked down the lane
discussions abounded
about
sand
flour
and
snow
and how
impressionable we both were
With your ass (_*_)
Head and shoulders
I dented deeper the grass
With your ass
and my
Hands
knees
and
toes
We left our impressions of sex
Missionary style
Finished;
We stood coyly
Admiring our indentations
Or sexual artwork
Our impressionist masterpiece
The need for a follow up
Burned in our loins
This time was different
You dented the grass
But not with your ass (_*_)
It was your
hands
knees
and
toes
And just, my feet
We kept going
despite the rain
still
there was no smell
of wet dog
finished;
we walked down the lane
discussions abounded
about
sand
flour
and
snow
and how
impressionable we both were
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Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 2:46am
Re: Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 4:37pm
Re. I like doing impressions
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16th Jan 2016 4:38pm
Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 4:08am
Lol, you better hope the cops didn't make plaster casts of your imprints...
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 4:39pm
Re: Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 9:59pm
Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 5:21am
Re: Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 4:40pm
Re. I like doing impressions
Lol David you tricked me. Definitely didn't think anything sexual when I seen the title 😜 yeah. Gotta love making impressions. But the snow? Might be too cold for me. Lol
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Re: Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 4:41pm
I have to admit - I've never done it in the snow, despite being from Scotland, - as you say too damn cold :-)
Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 3:36pm
Such creativity in execution ...as always beautiful words...such a playful sweet piece..enjoyed reading this
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Re: Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 4:42pm
I so hoped for somebody to see it as intended - playful and sweet - exactly what I was going for :-)
thank you :-)
thank you :-)
Re. I like doing impressions
16th Jan 2016 11:47pm
Re: Re. I like doing impressions
17th Jan 2016 6:48pm
LOL :-)
thank you as always for reading and giving me the inspiration from your cleverly funny responses :-)
thank you as always for reading and giving me the inspiration from your cleverly funny responses :-)