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red velvet line
sitting at my desk
Razor blade to my wrist
pressing in driving the blade into my skin
letting out all that blood under my skin
watching it drip down
from the red velvet line on my arm
lets hope this line is the one that ends it all
Razor blade to my wrist
pressing in driving the blade into my skin
letting out all that blood under my skin
watching it drip down
from the red velvet line on my arm
lets hope this line is the one that ends it all
Published 14th Jan 2016
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15th Jan 2016 00:12am
16th Jan 2016 5:14pm
so very sad - I too hope that it is not which I know seems selfish. I have been there before and I am so glad I missed (most of the time). Sorry I cannot join you in your hope :-)
14th Aug 2017 00:44am
The question i ask my self is can i like this poem about your suicide
On one hand its completely abhorrent,,,but theres something you must like about it
It takes fire to write a poem like that ...thats not depression...depression is to much earth and water...I don't think your afraid either ...not one fuckin bit...And im not at all shocked ....so tell me pretty girl what is it ...You know deep down inside ...have you admitted it to your self yet ? Are you paraphilias dream?...that would at least be good reason to shed blood
On one hand its completely abhorrent,,,but theres something you must like about it
It takes fire to write a poem like that ...thats not depression...depression is to much earth and water...I don't think your afraid either ...not one fuckin bit...And im not at all shocked ....so tell me pretty girl what is it ...You know deep down inside ...have you admitted it to your self yet ? Are you paraphilias dream?...that would at least be good reason to shed blood
