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Two hearts ...
she chose two hearts
one for her
one for him
shaped to perfection
from red marble
smooth and unblemished
like the love they shared
she placed them side by side
forever together,
two beautiful shapes
of love
one for her
one for him
shaped to perfection
from red marble
smooth and unblemished
like the love they shared
she placed them side by side
forever together,
two beautiful shapes
of love
Published 14th Jan 2016
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14th Jan 2016 1:50am
This has a lovely innocence to it, Jemac. It's tender and filled with hope. Red marble, great imagery there.
16th Jan 2016 2:12am
14th Jan 2016 3:31am
#TenderAndSweet.com
"shaped to perfection
from red marble
smooth and unblemished
like the love they shared"<--- this was just lovely je....
Pen love~
"shaped to perfection
from red marble
smooth and unblemished
like the love they shared"<--- this was just lovely je....
Pen love~
16th Jan 2016 2:13am
Thank You Rain for the read and thoughtful comments ... always appreciated ... ox
14th Jan 2016 3:37am
Why only two heArts and there yonder r the very happy surmised that each woman may overindulge the use of her muscles as heart supporters . How many muscles r there in any H ? Any feminine build? Unfortunately man enjoys one and nothing but one heart . This is a well-known fact dominating every male human . U -women enjoy your freelance footloose octopusity & we don't mind . We perhaps go finely content with only one heart for each .
14th Jan 2016 10:14am
16th Jan 2016 2:18am
Thank You for the read ultimatesubliminal ... and for your interesting response ... I guess I'll just leave it at that ...
14th Jan 2016 7:33am
16th Jan 2016 2:19am
