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I Would Like To Ask....
Why am I not allowed to be me?
Is it because by you I'm not free?
Were you the hands that locked me in chains?
Were you the smiles while I was drenched in the rains?
If I be like you, would you think that I'm great?
see your 'beauty' in me and say 'hiya mate'
Is it that you are so wonderful
That nothing else can ever be right?
Do you think that its true that you shine like a light?
And that nothing else ever will shine quite so bright?
Published 12th Jan 2016
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12th Jan 2016 12:34pm
Hmm yes sounds like you need to break away. Those are the ones that will stick their sharpened claws in you and let you bleed out. Be you ❤️ Liked that write (:
13th Jan 2016 9:37am
Thanks Red :) I wrote it about a year ago but thought I'd make it the first one I put on here! Maybe for my next one I will try to do a drugs and drink orgy like you did, mine will have to be based on total fiction and fantasy though I'm afraid lol
13th Jan 2016 4:19pm
Lol haha mine is definitely all in my head! Pure fantasy over here. But go for it! Lol I'll be waiting to read it haha
