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trying hard not to
im in front of your frozen grave.
waiting for a good bye.
waiting for the time to find the universe we lost so long ago.
ill wait for centuries just to hear your voice.
seeing time passing, as if it were dead.
find time in your head.
im a ticking time bomb.
I learn from regrets.
that we learn to try and fly and then we die.
waiting for a good bye.
waiting for the time to find the universe we lost so long ago.
ill wait for centuries just to hear your voice.
seeing time passing, as if it were dead.
find time in your head.
im a ticking time bomb.
I learn from regrets.
that we learn to try and fly and then we die.
Published 25th Jun 2011
| Edited 27th Jun 2011
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27th Jun 2011 9:05am
Try eliminating the here in "...seeing here time passing, as if it were dead...". Otherwise it makes the flow and rhythym a little choppy.
27th Jun 2011 9:36am
21st Jul 2011 10:12am
You reveal so many emotions in such a beautiful way.. Incredibly written!
22nd Jul 2011 5:22am
