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Savior Dlreaper-
Let me drop em off of a cliff...
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let em' tumble! but let his death be on his decision! Is he willinq to save himself?
In reply: fuqk em, straiqht tuqk em- Tenz suqk em!! They life if they welcome, if not, melt em! Honor the elderly and to all souls, help em! Dats what im committed to do, and bless the Anqels- piqk em up! tuqk em, truqk em, lead them to a path- lead em, these are the all reason's you should listen closly- These are the all reasons you should see a path- when ya qet there, praise it! From above, you can see it- What you see wit ya eyes, let it qo, no fear in the eyes of my heart, that's where I see it true... Breathe! ... As the council aqrees, bouncin-
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..,
..,
.,
let em' tumble! but let his death be on his decision! Is he willinq to save himself?
In reply: fuqk em, straiqht tuqk em- Tenz suqk em!! They life if they welcome, if not, melt em! Honor the elderly and to all souls, help em! Dats what im committed to do, and bless the Anqels- piqk em up! tuqk em, truqk em, lead them to a path- lead em, these are the all reason's you should listen closly- These are the all reasons you should see a path- when ya qet there, praise it! From above, you can see it- What you see wit ya eyes, let it qo, no fear in the eyes of my heart, that's where I see it true... Breathe! ... As the council aqrees, bouncin-
Published 24th Jun 2011
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9th Aug 2011 5:48am
The understandinq of this poem is that at the end of the road, there's epiphany. Its like beinq tauqht a lesson by Death, and sittin in a court room of qrimms who discuss whether he deserve to continue to live or not, dependinq on wat he did to die and if his purpose was fulfilled as God's will intended. Me, beinq the one who decides that he deserves to live on by speakinq him baqk to existence, by sayinq "breathe". I'll try to work on detail tho. Its almost like within seconds I reviewed the man's whole life and elaberated on the priciples it takes in order for him to resume life, I should've added detail on what exactly did he do to be killed in the first place-
