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Yes Indeed
The heels click makeup is on
a swivel of the hips accent a walk
moving from door to chair
I swear her body can talk
I'll be your daddy, come and ride
like the train steaming in the night
fueling the fires for volcanic eruptions
call it pleasure's delight
Hem is rather short and I pretend not to notice
being polite and putting forth chat
knowing full well what is stirring
isn't wood that constitutes this bat
I'll be your daddy, the aroused stud
the primal animal so energized
only question is how much you need
once I am in and you are opened wide
See the glances of desire
slightly playfull with a subtle tease
sexual vibrations so automatic
pretty much doing anything you please
I'll be your daddy, the deep layer
better then the bank with deposits and withdrawals
see how basic the drive to mate is
when the barriers of civilized society fall
a swivel of the hips accent a walk
moving from door to chair
I swear her body can talk
I'll be your daddy, come and ride
like the train steaming in the night
fueling the fires for volcanic eruptions
call it pleasure's delight
Hem is rather short and I pretend not to notice
being polite and putting forth chat
knowing full well what is stirring
isn't wood that constitutes this bat
I'll be your daddy, the aroused stud
the primal animal so energized
only question is how much you need
once I am in and you are opened wide
See the glances of desire
slightly playfull with a subtle tease
sexual vibrations so automatic
pretty much doing anything you please
I'll be your daddy, the deep layer
better then the bank with deposits and withdrawals
see how basic the drive to mate is
when the barriers of civilized society fall
Published 5th Jan 2016
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2016 2:39pm
Jazz,
Ah yes, the simple in's and out's of life (sigh...); stripped down to the basic's of supply and demand ;-)
Enjoyed!!
tornado
Ah yes, the simple in's and out's of life (sigh...); stripped down to the basic's of supply and demand ;-)
Enjoyed!!
tornado
5th Jan 2016 2:45pm
I am always amazed at how critical many women appear to be about their charms. Probably not as based as before but it feels like they place more weight on society's acceptance, even today, then men do. I could just be waxing naively...
5th Jan 2016 2:40pm
5th Jan 2016 6:29pm
5th Jan 2016 6:32pm
Thanks. Even if the emotions involved are not complicated there can still the presence of casualness, at least in my opinion
Anonymous
5th Jan 2016 3:52pm
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5th Jan 2016 10:04pm
I use to say that rhymes can only go so far---then I learned the Irvin of several songs, including "Yesterday" and changed my mind.
5th Jan 2016 3:57pm
yowza! smoothjazz i just love this sexy flow from start to finish... i'm kinda partial to the word "daddy"
grrrr drives me bonkers
this one's a keeper
xo
grrrr drives me bonkers
this one's a keeper
xo
5th Jan 2016 10:07pm
To be honest I have issues with the word. Then saw an 93 year old lady in a diner refer to her 87 year old husband as "daddy". Also thought about John Lennon referring to Yoko as "mother".
5th Jan 2016 5:25pm
"only question is how much you need
once I am in and you are opened wide
See the glances of desire
slightly playfull with a subtle tease
sexual vibrations so automatic
pretty much doing anything you please"
^^^^^ Ted, this was designed with a couple of sensual images for me that I enjoyed. Really love the teasing flow of this ink, though I'm probably a rare individual who loathe the term daddy during sexual acts....
once I am in and you are opened wide
See the glances of desire
slightly playfull with a subtle tease
sexual vibrations so automatic
pretty much doing anything you please"
^^^^^ Ted, this was designed with a couple of sensual images for me that I enjoyed. Really love the teasing flow of this ink, though I'm probably a rare individual who loathe the term daddy during sexual acts....
as I wrote to one of our comrades I had an issue with the word but was persuaded to keep it in. The first person who saw it (offline), told me it should stay.
6th Jan 2016 2:22am
You know what is appealing bout
this piece? Like most all you pen, it has a very sophisticated tone, wise, aware, n just made especially for the Grown n Sexy!! Nice bro! :)
this piece? Like most all you pen, it has a very sophisticated tone, wise, aware, n just made especially for the Grown n Sexy!! Nice bro! :)
6th Jan 2016 4:29am
Thanks. Love to say those qualities were intended- just the way it came out. I appreciate the comment, buddy.
6th Jan 2016 6:56pm
Hi Ted,
The classy feel suits this one so well. " Only question is how much you need" .<<<< that right there sir turns the women all shades of red haha!! I loved this !! Thank you so much for sharing this gift with us.
The classy feel suits this one so well. " Only question is how much you need" .<<<< that right there sir turns the women all shades of red haha!! I loved this !! Thank you so much for sharing this gift with us.
6th Jan 2016 9:01pm
If you say so. I don't really try to write with the idea of being classy so it is an added plus.
