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Music to Cut Your Wrists to
I thought I’d compose a piece
To help me life to decease
Alas this idea won't get off the ground
Not one note will ever sound
I don’t know a crotchet from a quaver
So my last dirge you’ll never savour
However I could borrow gloom
To accompany me unto the tomb
Should it be Stockhausen or dreary Mahler?
As they carry me to the funeral parlour
Music louring, full of dread
Reminding you, you too will soon be dead
One day we will all be ‘late’
For ‘tis a fact of dismal fate
But some advice whilst you are here
Stop reading this crap fill your cup with cheer!
To help me life to decease
Alas this idea won't get off the ground
Not one note will ever sound
I don’t know a crotchet from a quaver
So my last dirge you’ll never savour
However I could borrow gloom
To accompany me unto the tomb
Should it be Stockhausen or dreary Mahler?
As they carry me to the funeral parlour
Music louring, full of dread
Reminding you, you too will soon be dead
One day we will all be ‘late’
For ‘tis a fact of dismal fate
But some advice whilst you are here
Stop reading this crap fill your cup with cheer!
Published 4th Jan 2016
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4th Jan 2016 5:26pm
Baby..Yes..less do..happy that turned into good 'ol you at the end! Lol
But still a giggles the whole way through..i knew you were gonna!
Love you too pieces Tony.
Mih Kitty Cat..purrrrrs surround you..rubbin nose on knee..coz i am so durn happy to know ya!
Jen
But still a giggles the whole way through..i knew you were gonna!
Love you too pieces Tony.
Mih Kitty Cat..purrrrrs surround you..rubbin nose on knee..coz i am so durn happy to know ya!
Jen
4th Jan 2016 9:51pm
Oh Jen what are you like? You make me laugh with our witty comments. This poem was justa silly idea after having had to sit through some depressing dire dirge. I couldn't resist turning into a joke 'cos I ain't a neg head.
Luv's yer t' bitz,
Luv's yer t' bitz,
4th Jan 2016 9:35pm
Ha! Glad you added the ended. I was about to tell you to keep this death shit to yoself cause I ain't ready to go. :) I'm not sure which maker I'll be seeing since I'm constantly sinning, and I just don't wanna' read about it now... lol joking!
#Fun stuff.
#Fun stuff.
4th Jan 2016 9:59pm
Hi Tara,
I'm glad you saw the funny side of my daft ditty. I am writing all sorts of strange stuff lately. On another site I was given a strange subject for a comp. "Great Expectations" I wrote a couple of hundred words on it that came in a dream. I'll put it up soon (Short ink I promise)
As for your sins my lady I'm sure they are small ones, really small (And enjoyable,too, I hope) As a none believer in gods and devils I just try to do my best.(It don't always work out though)
Anyway if you have any interestin' sins please write about them in lurid detail, you know I love your work! :-)
Bug hugz to ya.
.
I'm glad you saw the funny side of my daft ditty. I am writing all sorts of strange stuff lately. On another site I was given a strange subject for a comp. "Great Expectations" I wrote a couple of hundred words on it that came in a dream. I'll put it up soon (Short ink I promise)
As for your sins my lady I'm sure they are small ones, really small (And enjoyable,too, I hope) As a none believer in gods and devils I just try to do my best.(It don't always work out though)
Anyway if you have any interestin' sins please write about them in lurid detail, you know I love your work! :-)
Bug hugz to ya.
.
