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SWEET TOOTH
Flossing my teeth
I release
The unmistakable taste
Of you
How this could be
I know not
It's been days since
You were in my mouth
But I am glad
For the reminder
And for your sweet nectar
No longer threatening my gums
I release
The unmistakable taste
Of you
How this could be
I know not
It's been days since
You were in my mouth
But I am glad
For the reminder
And for your sweet nectar
No longer threatening my gums
Published 4th Jan 2016
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4th Jan 2016 5:37pm
"It's been days since you been in my mouth" Even though it's a short poem, it gives a clear visual!
4th Jan 2016 8:17pm
Thanks. I like your poems, and understand that the taste is a pretty potent theme for you.
5th Jan 2016 4:39am
5th Jan 2016 4:56am
Just a joke because it's sweet. Maybe stupid. Wasn't sure it worked when I wrote it.
7th Jan 2016 5:55am
Memories can enflame our senses for a long time. Though we aren't Pavlov's perfect subject we do have some similar desires.
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