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my words
let my words be
warm
wrapping
heart
keeping
arms
let them be
drowsy
breathing
familiar
reassuring
love
let them be
intimately
inspiring
want
caressing
hands
let them be
sated
glowing
deep
lulling
sleep
let them be
only
filling
other
as your words
always
having
me
warm
wrapping
heart
keeping
arms
let them be
drowsy
breathing
familiar
reassuring
love
let them be
intimately
inspiring
want
caressing
hands
let them be
sated
glowing
deep
lulling
sleep
let them be
only
filling
other
as your words
always
having
me
Published 30th Dec 2015
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31st Dec 2015 4:37pm
1st Jan 2016 00:47am
Thanks, started with standard stanzaed poem, but I kept thinking "let my words be" and kept deconstructing to just the words... kind of an in the moment thought...
Anonymous
31st Dec 2015 11:02pm
This is fulfilling with warmth and cohesion.
Beautiful bit you have graced unto.
Beautiful bit you have graced unto.
1st Jan 2016 00:49am
Thank you... I wanted the words separately together for the reader to disassemble and reassemble as they read... kind of an experiment...
6th Jan 2016 3:02pm
6th Jan 2016 3:28pm
6th Jan 2016 9:39pm
i like it.
i like the confidence of the structure and the creativity with which all those very comfy words are presented.
lovely poem.
i like the confidence of the structure and the creativity with which all those very comfy words are presented.
lovely poem.
6th Jan 2016 10:00pm
thank you... I had all these thoughts and just kept cutting down, reading them backwards and forwards... I am glad you like it...
11th Jan 2016 10:41am
11th Jan 2016 12:49pm
thank you... just cut it down to these impressions of peace and comfort... as I wish my words to be...
