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Euphemystically Seeking Float
Losing grasp fast
Losing the matters to me
Shreds me to tattered
If i weren't so tired
I would just up and combust
I need to swing away
Surging the urges
I take one in my night fright
I cannot hit
The dark pillows it
I only head on harder
Faster
And there i rise
Above ground
Feet dangle
Treading air in frustration
Mind twists
Twirls like wings of the cicada
Trapped in tummy
Screams for summer buzz howl
No decompression
Causing wretched expression
A cross twisted grin
Wears Gin
Hair tangles up in rats
Wants to grow long and down
Longs to sweep across ground
Longs for sweet gravity
And Earths touch
I miss the Earth so fucking much
Losing the matters to me
Shreds me to tattered
If i weren't so tired
I would just up and combust
I need to swing away
Surging the urges
I take one in my night fright
I cannot hit
The dark pillows it
I only head on harder
Faster
And there i rise
Above ground
Feet dangle
Treading air in frustration
Mind twists
Twirls like wings of the cicada
Trapped in tummy
Screams for summer buzz howl
No decompression
Causing wretched expression
A cross twisted grin
Wears Gin
Hair tangles up in rats
Wants to grow long and down
Longs to sweep across ground
Longs for sweet gravity
And Earths touch
I miss the Earth so fucking much
Published 24th Dec 2015
| Edited 25th Dec 2015
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- Edited 24th Dec 2015 10:22pm
24th Dec 2015 10:20pm
Ahhh . . . Sounds to me as though your inner self
your Muse . . . Whatever . . . Says for you to slow
down a little, baby, and actually touch the ground,
wriggle your toes in the sand and return to your
roots . . . Eh, on the other hand it could be saying
after you wriggle your pretty toes in that sand, you
can lift off the ground and go back to where you
were, not forgetting how that sand felt between
your toes!
Long hair touching the ground? I hope not!
your Muse . . . Whatever . . . Says for you to slow
down a little, baby, and actually touch the ground,
wriggle your toes in the sand and return to your
roots . . . Eh, on the other hand it could be saying
after you wriggle your pretty toes in that sand, you
can lift off the ground and go back to where you
were, not forgetting how that sand felt between
your toes!
Long hair touching the ground? I hope not!
24th Dec 2015 10:50pm
Yes babydoll..on both accounts. The long haired women..part of the Vril society..
Apart from the horrific association with Nazi Germany, I am intrigued with their belief in a cosmic communication transmitted perpetually by long uncut locks..not an original idea..
Samson lost his touch by Delilah s deep cut...
Nothing to do with anything beyond a need for direct flow of thought...and deep connection...
A bit manic.
Love
J
Apart from the horrific association with Nazi Germany, I am intrigued with their belief in a cosmic communication transmitted perpetually by long uncut locks..not an original idea..
Samson lost his touch by Delilah s deep cut...
Nothing to do with anything beyond a need for direct flow of thought...and deep connection...
A bit manic.
Love
J
Anonymous
24th Dec 2015 11:44pm
Hah! "A bit manic," is something we get ourselves
into when the road become too oppressive or too
depressive . . . it helps clear the air, sha!
P.S.: sha . . . A term of affection
into when the road become too oppressive or too
depressive . . . it helps clear the air, sha!
P.S.: sha . . . A term of affection
24th Dec 2015 11:52pm
Anonymous
25th Dec 2015 3:57am
I told you already above. It means a term of
endearment or affection . . . Some coonass talk!
endearment or affection . . . Some coonass talk!
25th Dec 2015 4:07am
Lol...Coonis was my married name..havent been called a coonass term of affection in some time....lol...
I like it...
I like it...
25th Dec 2015 00:20am
Creatively transcendent in thought...
Very impressive my dear, you keep
changing n it's a refreshing thing anytime one can see new growth
in a writers ink :)
Very impressive my dear, you keep
changing n it's a refreshing thing anytime one can see new growth
in a writers ink :)
25th Dec 2015 1:00am
25th Dec 2015 2:23am
Jen,
even through that mania you express yourself beautifully. I hope you come down to earth soon but don't burrow in and go in the opposite direction ok? It seems like one leads to the other a lot of times and I hope you just steady out and become totally stabilized.
Thinking of you.
Love,
John
even through that mania you express yourself beautifully. I hope you come down to earth soon but don't burrow in and go in the opposite direction ok? It seems like one leads to the other a lot of times and I hope you just steady out and become totally stabilized.
Thinking of you.
Love,
John
25th Dec 2015 2:30am
Awe..doll. Thanks for lookin out...just a bit..not overly..
Stress of holiday i am sure. .
Im good..and better with care like yours..
Talk to you tomorrow sweetheart..
Love
Jen
Stress of holiday i am sure. .
Im good..and better with care like yours..
Talk to you tomorrow sweetheart..
Love
Jen
25th Dec 2015 11:05am
Read like a lost soul a-lookin' for some kind of redemption to me though to be honest I don't think I got to grips with this one. Maybe my lack of understanding should disqualify me from commenting, I dunno. I liked your poetic use of language as always but found the poem as a whole a little confusing. Sorry.
25th Dec 2015 8:22pm
A manic mind lookin for ground..
I get up in thought and cannot come down at times..wrote it much like my manic thinkin...
Out of order..and a lil hard to understand...but all had reason behind it..
Wasn't meant to be understood word for word..
Merely felt. No worries kitty kat...
My soul is not lost..just get lost at times inside my own head.....
Love
Jen
I get up in thought and cannot come down at times..wrote it much like my manic thinkin...
Out of order..and a lil hard to understand...but all had reason behind it..
Wasn't meant to be understood word for word..
Merely felt. No worries kitty kat...
My soul is not lost..just get lost at times inside my own head.....
Love
Jen
26th Dec 2015 7:49pm
This is a challenging one Jen, and it doesn't lend itself to easy interpretation. I thought it might be astral projection gone awry but I read some of the comments above.
"No decompression
Causing wretched expression
A cross twisted grin
Wears Gin"
These lines sound like the manic phase of the bipolar syndrome, something I'm all too familiar with when off my meds. Mixed feelings all the way.
It seems like you're experimenting, and if that's the case I'd say you're succeeding. Trying a variety of styles livens up your work. Fine job!
"No decompression
Causing wretched expression
A cross twisted grin
Wears Gin"
These lines sound like the manic phase of the bipolar syndrome, something I'm all too familiar with when off my meds. Mixed feelings all the way.
It seems like you're experimenting, and if that's the case I'd say you're succeeding. Trying a variety of styles livens up your work. Fine job!
26th Dec 2015 8:23pm
Thanks Thomas..great comments..
I'd say astral projection gone awry has a lot of merit to it..
Especially with the Vril ladies in my mind...i have a strange attachment to them..that i am not exactly comfy with..
Esoteric neo-Nazism is not something i aspire too..lol
Vril is the energy source..Vril society more a league of "un" gentlemen..
But the women..and their long lock connection to extraterrestrial thought and energy? Just a life long curiosity for me..and the hair energy thought pops up throughout religious literature and history..
There is a very intersting passage about hair in Temple Grandins book..
My favorite Anais Nin quote..
".... live according to the demons and the imagination in me. I'm restless. Things are calling me away. My hair is being pulled by the stars again."
I cant stand growing mine over my ears..
And for whatever reason..during mania..it becomes a demon.
That all sounded....?!
Lol
All my love darlin
Jen
I'd say astral projection gone awry has a lot of merit to it..
Especially with the Vril ladies in my mind...i have a strange attachment to them..that i am not exactly comfy with..
Esoteric neo-Nazism is not something i aspire too..lol
Vril is the energy source..Vril society more a league of "un" gentlemen..
But the women..and their long lock connection to extraterrestrial thought and energy? Just a life long curiosity for me..and the hair energy thought pops up throughout religious literature and history..
There is a very intersting passage about hair in Temple Grandins book..
My favorite Anais Nin quote..
".... live according to the demons and the imagination in me. I'm restless. Things are calling me away. My hair is being pulled by the stars again."
I cant stand growing mine over my ears..
And for whatever reason..during mania..it becomes a demon.
That all sounded....?!
Lol
All my love darlin
Jen
