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rain
waiting for you
at the seaside
on a grey November evening
cold rain
is wetting my skin
there's no other place
where I wanna be
at the seaside
on a grey November evening
cold rain
is wetting my skin
there's no other place
where I wanna be
Published 23rd Dec 2015
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23rd Dec 2015 11:49pm
24th Dec 2015 00:50am
28th Feb 2016 7:41am
Very nice write man, dig this. Simple, but concise and heavily descriptive of the characters thoughts, and feelings, very well done.
26th Mar 2016 1:36pm
rain is a marvellous context for love in theory and film noir - not so sure about singing in a persistent mind numbingly rain-driven day. Like the poem mind you.
