Wicked Play

Holy crap... Super disturbing darkness... Thought I was enjoy the 'show' for a lil bit, then suddenly
I realized it wasn't 'that kinda party'
Excellent, though troubling ink.

Weren't ready for that were you? I'm feeling a little devilish today. Lol

Ah, Miss Red. . .My kind of Darkness. . .wicked, disturbing, relentless. . .It's okay to feel a "little devilish", or how else would we channel that beast?. . .Excellent ink, non~traditional [poetic] flow, great imagery. . .~Devlin.

Of course I think the beast deserved to come out an play for a little while. It was definitely time consuming making this one but worth it even if people probably think I'm a little weird now lol thank you for commenting I means a lot coming from you (:

care not for what others think,write what is on your minds tongue they either get it or they do not, the point is you told your story and gave a voice to your thoughts

Thank you. Most of the time I really don't care but sometimes I'm wondering how others perceive me to be. But it doesn't matter at the end of the day. Were all strangers passing thru each others lives

hey fuck everyone else red, dark writes being the majority of my writes and being a dark writer you don't get much credit or acknowledgment, but its not about that I'm happy you stepped out the box tho that shows a good writer and not a one trick pony that writes hardy hard boys erotic type novels over and over and over and over again, its a fashion show and popularity contest for a certain elite squad of poets on here and it doesn't take much searching to see whos in the club and not, ..i voiced my opinion about it but  was asked not to blow these cats up and let them feel important because  with my 2 months of even writing i could start a  with holocaust of word play and a mass grave with this varsity jacket wearing pivot in circle jerk poets and some just use this site to stalk people and troll which could get some people in serious umm  polite, respectful non-violent battle reading contest about Glock 17  and 27 blows situations, stay up red your all good,

Lol you should turn this into something. And your words are very true. Just one big pissing contest but I have you and a few other ACTUAL talented poets to give feedback and that's what matters (: fuck a fake friend where my real friend at lol thanks love (:

this is one of your best writes in my opinion  very well writen and down write professional bravo indeed , and thank you for joining ,and posting  on my poetry page on facebook, group..
sinister -pens page and dark poets !
rock \m/ your support is greatly appriciated , it paves the way when a women has balls, if you will lol to step out the box and actully post it online much respect red much respect, and this woill be going on my read list tomorrow right now i gotta jet quick

Awwww you don't know how happy your comment made me.... Wait... Two words. Crimson Clover (; lol yes I'm stealing your words. And honestly your the reason why I was able to do this at all. So thank you (: your poetry inspires all the time whether you know it or not.

well that's an honor!! i inspired you that's a good feeling , idk  how but you make me feel innocent lots of times its a good feeling, and see mods my shit insipres hmmff hmmmfff lol  your really gonna like the above comment if it doesnt get banned for people complaining be you red always :)

Lol there words coming to mind...,  dork 😜😘 your the best (:

With this poem you have shown great diversity and talent. I knew you'd find your niche in our humble abode. I know it's hard not to care what others think, but the anonymity here, for me, allows my thoughts to fly! Loving the excellent new write.➰

Yes I'm excited to explore the dark side muahahaha (: thanks for reading and I'm so glad you liked it

look whos the dork now lol muwwahaha

You both are dorks & im a nut!  The way u two banter leaves me in stitches😝!➰(by the way, love the pic, pulls it all together!)

Lol that's cuz I learn from the best (:

Lol I'm glad your finding entertainment out of us 😁 and yes I thought the picture was perfect (:

Only out of respect & friendship. ➰

Of course (:

Red, very dark.. there isn't a write you can't do.. nice flow, cryptic imagery.. my kinda darkness.. nicely done.. much respect..



Dave

Diamond Dave thank you (: I'm glad I was able to create that image. I wanted everyone to see what I was seeing in my own head and I think I accomplished that. Hope your Xmas was good (:

This is what you can call fucked, Then Fucked. Really enjoyed keep it raw and hard.

Yeah it was all sorts of fucked. Glad you enjoyed