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White girl wasted
We party hard
Yeah we get fucked up
If you party with us
You lucked up
Got beer
Keep em on ice
36 pack
It should suffice
Hypnotic
Icy blue
Got the 5th
Just for two
Tequila
Salt and lime
Body shots
About that time
Vodka
Grey goose
Screwdrivers
Make you loose
Jack Daniels
Honey smooth
Strong whiskey
Sure to soothe
Marijuana
We stay lit
Puff puff
Pass that shit
We got the best stuff
You ever tasted
So come on over
Let's get white girl wasted!!!
Yeah we get fucked up
If you party with us
You lucked up
Got beer
Keep em on ice
36 pack
It should suffice
Hypnotic
Icy blue
Got the 5th
Just for two
Tequila
Salt and lime
Body shots
About that time
Vodka
Grey goose
Screwdrivers
Make you loose
Jack Daniels
Honey smooth
Strong whiskey
Sure to soothe
Marijuana
We stay lit
Puff puff
Pass that shit
We got the best stuff
You ever tasted
So come on over
Let's get white girl wasted!!!
Published 20th Dec 2015
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20th Dec 2015 6:21am
Wow, it's party time!! I'll be over in a bout an hour! lol u can keep though liquor though, a few brews n some really GOOD burn will get me smoothly faded!! lol
20th Dec 2015 7:13am
20th Dec 2015 12:55pm
Anonymous
21st Dec 2015 5:35pm
Red, great write.. love the flow.. sounds like you got good taste in booze.. with respect..
Dave
Dave
21st Dec 2015 5:42pm
Dave. It never hurt to have a variety eh? Lol and thanks for the comment (:
21st Dec 2015 9:48pm
This was an incredibly clever poem-- I loved it, it possessed the right amount of sensuality, humor, and wit. The over-stimulation of images, as you list an almost litany of some really great liquor is perfect for getting White Girl Wasted and for the reader to partake in a poem that gets the party started. This was great work.
21st Dec 2015 10:04pm
Yes I had a lot of fun writing this. I'm glad you were able to enjoy it as well (: I almost felt like an alcoholic for this haha
22nd Dec 2015 4:37pm
Lol.....I remember when I first heard of getting "white girl wasted", it was hilarious to me for some reason.
Nicely done. You had great rhythm here.
Nicely done. You had great rhythm here.
22nd Dec 2015 5:16pm
It was hilarious the first time I heard it. But somewhat true cuz of all my friends my white girls party hard the best lol thanks for commenting
