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Blackmailed - Poem

Blackmailed - Poem

Lying in dorm spindling coed dreams
Sparkle of love in her whiskey eyes
Flashes like sun spots in my soul

Temptress only wanted a kiss
Her black heart hardened
To slip secret to wife

�Don�t worry this won�t hurt a bit�
She unzips my Pandora�s box
Torrid torment of her touch

She tongue lashes me into obedience
Till sensual slavery rules my manhood
Her lips blow me to smithereens

Written by goldenmyst

Published 18th Dec 2015

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Re. Blackmailed - Poem

snugglebuck

20th Dec 2015 3:15pm

So many times, I'll read an erotic piece written by guys, where the act of sex is described as a man asserting his dominance over a woman. In reality, the very opposite is true.

Thanks for helping deconstruct this myth. Just don't be a fool, like I was, and volunteer to do her term papers.

Good scribble.

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Re. Blackmailed - Poem

goldenmyst

20th Dec 2015 6:30pm

Thanks so much man. Indeed it is usually the opposite. And guys to tend to focus on male dominance when they write erotic. I tend to write the opposite perspective. Good to meet a guy who understands this point of view. Much thanks.

John

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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am

17th May 2019 9:43pm

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Re. Blackmailed - Poem

goldenmyst

17th May 2019 10:31pm

What you said was the perfect response to this poem. I�m so glad you dug up this piece. Most glad you enjoyed my envisioning of the experience of a woman who knows what she is doing. John

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