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elementary...
it was really busy in town
and I didn't know where you'd gone
until I remembered where
I'd last seen you
and then I decided that you
must have gone
from there...
Published 17th Dec 2015
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17th Dec 2015 1:21am
17th Dec 2015 10:27am
A fleeting glance you hoped to recapture in the same place but realize it's impossible
17th Dec 2015 11:22pm
and yet if one could replicate the exact
conditions...
no, your right, it's not going to work...
conditions...
no, your right, it's not going to work...
17th Dec 2015 4:58pm
17th Dec 2015 11:24pm
17th Dec 2015 9:33pm
Really loved this - there's something in the simplicity of it! A definite curtsy bow indeed!
17th Dec 2015 11:25pm
18th Dec 2015 2:59pm
The twists and turn of your mind are always fascinating. It's like watching someone in the darkened corner of a cafe think.
18th Dec 2015 6:15pm
Watson once painted their house door yellow only to hear Holmes utter "A Lemon Entry my dear Watson" - god that was bad - sorry :p
18th Dec 2015 10:56pm
19th Dec 2015 9:53pm
AHhhhhh....caught up in the moment of the mystery......
Deucedly clever deduction!!!....but if Holmes and Watson have failed to discover her whereabouts, perhaps you might consider the infamous Dr. Moriarty.....
as a possible suspect....????
Deucedly clever deduction!!!....but if Holmes and Watson have failed to discover her whereabouts, perhaps you might consider the infamous Dr. Moriarty.....
as a possible suspect....????
20th Dec 2015 11:04pm
when even the world's
greatest consulting detective
can't close the case,
then you need to remove
a few shirts...
greatest consulting detective
can't close the case,
then you need to remove
a few shirts...
