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Pain
All I got is pain..
All my deeds in vain..
Or so it seems!
Enough recoiling,
Enough blood boiling,
Yes I did scream!
Self pity, self harm,
No longer hold charm,
You held the beam!
Stars in my eye,
No more make me cry
Now I don't dream!
If there was no pain,
Then what was my gain,
Thought love was supreme!
(Previously submitted as a competition entry http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/8431/)
© 2015 KDAmB
Published 3rd Dec 2015
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3rd Dec 2015 4:31pm
A great, strong cry of expression..
Liked this a lot darlin..
Scream it out!
Love
J
Liked this a lot darlin..
Scream it out!
Love
J
4th Dec 2015 8:19am
Thank You Jennifer.. for your kind words of love and encouragement.. do mean a lot...
Cheers!!
KDAmB
Cheers!!
KDAmB
3rd Dec 2015 5:27pm
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Anonymous
29th Jul 2016 5:13pm
So much sadness and angst. The emotions are truly felt deeply.
A beautiful voice of expression.
A beautiful voice of expression.
29th Jul 2016 6:38pm
I thank you for your generosity and kindness. Truly appreciate your understanding! I welcome your presence! Thank You!
KDAmB
KDAmB
