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Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
1st Dec 2015 4:50am
so much beauty in the scripted verses;
scents, colors, places near & far.
extraordinary engagement of art-weavers...
scents, colors, places near & far.
extraordinary engagement of art-weavers...
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Re: Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
1st Dec 2015 4:10pm
Thank you John for enjoying the beauty of the verses.
I have to thank Mr. Soul for his eloquent pen for the inspiration.
I have to thank Mr. Soul for his eloquent pen for the inspiration.
Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
1st Dec 2015 3:28pm
Beautiful! I can almost hear music with this words. Full of wonderful imagery.
Magical team for sure ; )
Magical team for sure ; )
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Re: Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
1st Dec 2015 4:12pm
It turned out beautiful and I'm quite happy with the result to proudly share with Mr. Soul. He certainly is one of the best writers here at du and i was thrilled to work with him.
Thanks for appreciating it mamacita :)
Thanks for appreciating it mamacita :)
Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
2nd Dec 2015 11:18am
Splendid Artistry :) bravo you two...your pens mesh well together..this flowed elegantly and the imagery was outstanding.. Loved it
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Re: Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
2nd Dec 2015 3:36pm
Thank you PD, the surprise was how well our styles of writing meshed and blended, the outcome turned out elegantly classical. Very happy you enjoyed it :)
Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
Oh my Rina! What an amazing collaboration and with one of my favorite DU poets no doubt! Your pens flowed so smoothly together, had it not been for the change in font, I'd never guess who was speaking. Just a beautiful blend to this piece. Wonderfully done you two! :)
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Re: Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
18th Dec 2015 10:23pm
Rain, I'm sure you've known Soul longer than I have and everything that he brings to the table is nothing but class and exquisite craftsmanship.
It was effortless and easy, within minutes this was put together.
I hope we can work together again in the near future.
Thank you for enjoying this and for always wonderful and enthusiastic feedback :)
It was effortless and easy, within minutes this was put together.
I hope we can work together again in the near future.
Thank you for enjoying this and for always wonderful and enthusiastic feedback :)
Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
4th Dec 2015 7:11pm
a collabo stitched with gorgeous threads, "Pavilion of pleasures" love that line, was intrigued by the title so i googled it: deep red beloved jasmine? boundless beauty nonetheless...
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Re: Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
18th Dec 2015 10:26pm
It was based on a Japanese influence of underlying notes with a Chinese fable as the background theme.
The title is actually to Soul's credit, we were storming some ideas based on blushing/plums and he came up with the title. Very fitting and beautiful.
Thank you Dean for taking the time to read and appreciate. I'm truly pleased by your feedback.
The title is actually to Soul's credit, we were storming some ideas based on blushing/plums and he came up with the title. Very fitting and beautiful.
Thank you Dean for taking the time to read and appreciate. I'm truly pleased by your feedback.
Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
17th Dec 2015 8:15pm
December's cold may ever be bold
but with these collaborators
the chill dents not the soul.
but with these collaborators
the chill dents not the soul.
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Re: Re. Akane Airi (A Collaboration: Souladareatease & Vee)
18th Dec 2015 10:30pm
Wow Mr. Jazz, what can i say but humbly thank you for liking our work.
With a comment like that, you just made my day :)))
With a comment like that, you just made my day :)))