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IF WOMEN DIDN'T HAVE PUSSIES.....THEY WOULDN'T EVEN MAKE GOOD PETS
If Women Didn't Have Pussies
They Wouldn't Even Make Good Pets
This is my Saying
My Thought
My Belief
Pretty Much Says It All
So You Might Snicker
Or You Might Gripe
But Even The Women
Out There
Know That I Am Right
EF
They Wouldn't Even Make Good Pets
This is my Saying
My Thought
My Belief
Pretty Much Says It All
So You Might Snicker
Or You Might Gripe
But Even The Women
Out There
Know That I Am Right
EF
Published 21st Nov 2015
| Edited 14th Sep 2019
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21st Nov 2015 11:08am
"Pretty Much Says It All"
Poetry means many different things to many different people. While I fear many will look at the alienating language of this piece and cast it off as chauvinistic drivel, I wanted to look deeper to see if I could glean a more meaningful message. This is what I took from the piece.
The narrator leads off with abrasive language. This could be indicative of a desire to be left alone, a literary "keep out" sign. He has been hurt before, many times. And each time, it took a little bit more from him until he is finally able to minimize the whole concept of a relationship with the opposite gender to the only enjoyable part, the sex. He embraces this minimization and uses it as a shield to ensure that he'll never be hurt again.
Poetry means many different things to many different people. While I fear many will look at the alienating language of this piece and cast it off as chauvinistic drivel, I wanted to look deeper to see if I could glean a more meaningful message. This is what I took from the piece.
The narrator leads off with abrasive language. This could be indicative of a desire to be left alone, a literary "keep out" sign. He has been hurt before, many times. And each time, it took a little bit more from him until he is finally able to minimize the whole concept of a relationship with the opposite gender to the only enjoyable part, the sex. He embraces this minimization and uses it as a shield to ensure that he'll never be hurt again.
"ACTUALLY DOESN'T SAY MUCH AT ALL"
(Warning this turned out to be a long reply to a to a very considerate comment)
U WERE RIGHT ABOUT 1 THING I HAVE BEEN HURT ALOT BUT, I PROMISED MYSELF WHEN I WAS ABOUT 16 THAT I WOULD NEVER CLOSE MYSELF TO GETTING HURT BY LOVE. AFTER GETTING MY HEART CRUSHED BY MY "TRUE LOVE"(@ that young age). IT TOOK WATCHING THIS GIRL I WAS WITH, GOING UP TO MY X IN FRONT OF ALL OUR FRIENDS "THANKING HER" (sarcastically) FOR HURTING ME SO BAD THAT I WAS UNWILLING TO EVEN CONSIDER LOVING HER,
THUS PASSING UP THE LOVE SHE THOUGHT WOULD MAKE ME HAPPIER THAN I HAD EVER BEEN. HEARING THIS, EVER SINCE THEN I WILLING OPEN MY HEART 110% + CUZ I WILL NOT BE THE ONE THAT KEEPS ME FROM FINDING MY TRUE OR EVEN JUST A GOOD LOVE.
AS FOR MY "STATEMENT" IT'S MORE A FACTUAL OBSERVATION. THE PART ABOUT "WOMEN KNOWING I'M RIGHT" (This part may sound a bit "chauvinistic" or stereotypical but, it's not). CUZ IF WOMEN DIDN'T HAVE WHAT ALL US GUYS WANT, A LOT OF US WOULDN'T PUT UP WITH SOME OF THE THINGS THE FEMALE MIND/EMOTIONS PUTS US THRU. ON THE FLIP SIDE. A LOT OR MOST WOMEN OUT THERE WOULD NOT DO GOOD @ HAVING SOMEONE IN CONTROL OF THEM AND THEIR LIVES. NOT BEING ALLOWED THEIR OWN OPINIONS, THOUGHTS, WANTS ETC. SOME SAY WITH WOMEN IT'S MORE EMOTIONAL, I AGREE BUT IT'S THAT PHYSICAL, HENCE "PUSSY" THAT TURNS BOTH INTO "LOVE" (Sometimes blind Love) AND WITHOUT "LOVE" HOW MANY WOMEN DO U THINK WOULD LISTEN TO OR EVEN GIVE A SHIT ABOUT SOME ASSHOLE SHE COULDN'T OR NEVER SLEPT WITH AND HAD NO EMOTIONAL TIES TO, ORDER HER WHAT TO DO "SIT UP, SPEAK, ROLL OVER, GO LAY DOWN, STAY, FETCH THIS, ETC." OH FUCK NO, U FIND 1 THAT WOULD, JUST TO PLEASE THEIR MASTER, AND U'VE FOUND 1 FUCKED UP HUMAN BEING. THIS IS WHY MY "POEM/STATEMENT IS NOT JUST "chauvinistic drivel" IT SAYS WITHOUT A PUSSY (good sex!, not bad/lame sex + FEMALE EMOTIONS) = LOVE/BLIND LOVE (sometimes)....YOU HAVE A CREATURE THAT HAS NO REAL INCENTIVE TO MAKE YOU HAPPY, DO EVERYTHING FOR YOU, MAKE YOUR LIFE STRESS FREE, AND GENERALLY JUST MORE ENJOYABLE. RIGHT.....
HERE IS REAL LIFE EXAMPLE (condensed version) WHEN A WOMAN REALLY LOVES U SHE WILL OVER LOOK THINGS OR DO THINGS SHE KINDA DOESN'T WANT TO BUT, WILL CUZ OF LOVE. NOW WHEN THIS SAME WOMAN DOESN'T LOVE U ANYMORE, U GET NO MORE "PUSSY", SHE SEES EVERYTHING ABOUT U SHE OVER LOOKED BEFORE BUT, NOW IRRITATES HER TO NO END. EVERYTHING U TRY TO MAKE HER HAPPY, JUST MAKES HER WANT TO HURT U MORE. AND THEN UR OUT OF HER LIFE. (this is not all women but, it can be depending on the guy) SO TO MAKE A LONG STORY EVEN LONGER "IF WOMEN DIDN'T HAVE PUSSIES.....THEY WOULDN'T EVEN MAKE GOOD PETS"
(Warning this turned out to be a long reply to a to a very considerate comment)
U WERE RIGHT ABOUT 1 THING I HAVE BEEN HURT ALOT BUT, I PROMISED MYSELF WHEN I WAS ABOUT 16 THAT I WOULD NEVER CLOSE MYSELF TO GETTING HURT BY LOVE. AFTER GETTING MY HEART CRUSHED BY MY "TRUE LOVE"(@ that young age). IT TOOK WATCHING THIS GIRL I WAS WITH, GOING UP TO MY X IN FRONT OF ALL OUR FRIENDS "THANKING HER" (sarcastically) FOR HURTING ME SO BAD THAT I WAS UNWILLING TO EVEN CONSIDER LOVING HER,
THUS PASSING UP THE LOVE SHE THOUGHT WOULD MAKE ME HAPPIER THAN I HAD EVER BEEN. HEARING THIS, EVER SINCE THEN I WILLING OPEN MY HEART 110% + CUZ I WILL NOT BE THE ONE THAT KEEPS ME FROM FINDING MY TRUE OR EVEN JUST A GOOD LOVE.
AS FOR MY "STATEMENT" IT'S MORE A FACTUAL OBSERVATION. THE PART ABOUT "WOMEN KNOWING I'M RIGHT" (This part may sound a bit "chauvinistic" or stereotypical but, it's not). CUZ IF WOMEN DIDN'T HAVE WHAT ALL US GUYS WANT, A LOT OF US WOULDN'T PUT UP WITH SOME OF THE THINGS THE FEMALE MIND/EMOTIONS PUTS US THRU. ON THE FLIP SIDE. A LOT OR MOST WOMEN OUT THERE WOULD NOT DO GOOD @ HAVING SOMEONE IN CONTROL OF THEM AND THEIR LIVES. NOT BEING ALLOWED THEIR OWN OPINIONS, THOUGHTS, WANTS ETC. SOME SAY WITH WOMEN IT'S MORE EMOTIONAL, I AGREE BUT IT'S THAT PHYSICAL, HENCE "PUSSY" THAT TURNS BOTH INTO "LOVE" (Sometimes blind Love) AND WITHOUT "LOVE" HOW MANY WOMEN DO U THINK WOULD LISTEN TO OR EVEN GIVE A SHIT ABOUT SOME ASSHOLE SHE COULDN'T OR NEVER SLEPT WITH AND HAD NO EMOTIONAL TIES TO, ORDER HER WHAT TO DO "SIT UP, SPEAK, ROLL OVER, GO LAY DOWN, STAY, FETCH THIS, ETC." OH FUCK NO, U FIND 1 THAT WOULD, JUST TO PLEASE THEIR MASTER, AND U'VE FOUND 1 FUCKED UP HUMAN BEING. THIS IS WHY MY "POEM/STATEMENT IS NOT JUST "chauvinistic drivel" IT SAYS WITHOUT A PUSSY (good sex!, not bad/lame sex + FEMALE EMOTIONS) = LOVE/BLIND LOVE (sometimes)....YOU HAVE A CREATURE THAT HAS NO REAL INCENTIVE TO MAKE YOU HAPPY, DO EVERYTHING FOR YOU, MAKE YOUR LIFE STRESS FREE, AND GENERALLY JUST MORE ENJOYABLE. RIGHT.....
HERE IS REAL LIFE EXAMPLE (condensed version) WHEN A WOMAN REALLY LOVES U SHE WILL OVER LOOK THINGS OR DO THINGS SHE KINDA DOESN'T WANT TO BUT, WILL CUZ OF LOVE. NOW WHEN THIS SAME WOMAN DOESN'T LOVE U ANYMORE, U GET NO MORE "PUSSY", SHE SEES EVERYTHING ABOUT U SHE OVER LOOKED BEFORE BUT, NOW IRRITATES HER TO NO END. EVERYTHING U TRY TO MAKE HER HAPPY, JUST MAKES HER WANT TO HURT U MORE. AND THEN UR OUT OF HER LIFE. (this is not all women but, it can be depending on the guy) SO TO MAKE A LONG STORY EVEN LONGER "IF WOMEN DIDN'T HAVE PUSSIES.....THEY WOULDN'T EVEN MAKE GOOD PETS"
