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Unforgettable Love
A title left alone. Just still until its writer sheds black or blue ink underneath its surface. I never forgot, I only had little inspiration to master words for such a title. But I must give into the piece....
A talk of great time can turn into discoveries of hidden or lost treasure. Why do I get the feeling that we were lost from each other in time. "Oh my love how I have longed for you, and oh you haven't aged a bit!" One kiss to you physical essences holds the soul that I knew ago. Please show me the love I once blissfully grasp in my heart. I never stopped the dreams and prayers of you reaching my suffering soul of sorrow. Although you came before me, you waited like never before.
You asked the Creator to bring me to you because you were shot by wicket arrows of lust.
"I have returned my love."
It is real, in the flesh, but the spirit is who you seek instead of the hands.
Smell my essences that you never forgotten.
See deeper within.
"It's I, your Unforgettable and Love Twin-flame."
A talk of great time can turn into discoveries of hidden or lost treasure. Why do I get the feeling that we were lost from each other in time. "Oh my love how I have longed for you, and oh you haven't aged a bit!" One kiss to you physical essences holds the soul that I knew ago. Please show me the love I once blissfully grasp in my heart. I never stopped the dreams and prayers of you reaching my suffering soul of sorrow. Although you came before me, you waited like never before.
You asked the Creator to bring me to you because you were shot by wicket arrows of lust.
"I have returned my love."
It is real, in the flesh, but the spirit is who you seek instead of the hands.
Smell my essences that you never forgotten.
See deeper within.
"It's I, your Unforgettable and Love Twin-flame."
Published 19th Nov 2015
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20th Nov 2015 8:46am
Such a beautiful sentiment in these lines... "Oh my love how I have longed for you" yea, I know that feeling! nice ink :)
23rd Mar 2024 5:24pm
This piece captures a sense of longing and reunion with a poetic and almost ethereal quality. The title, "Unforgettable Love," sets the stage for a narrative that explores the enduring nature of love beyond the constraints of time and physicality.
The imagery of lost treasure and being lost from each other in time adds depth to the theme of reunion and rediscovery. The use of dialogue, particularly the exchange between the lovers, adds a personal and intimate touch to the piece.
The concept of a twin flame and the idea of seeking the essence of the beloved beyond the physical form adds a spiritual dimension to the narrative, elevating it beyond a mere love story.
Overall, the writing evokes a sense of yearning, longing, and ultimately, a profound connection that transcends the physical realm. It's a beautiful exploration of love's enduring power.
The imagery of lost treasure and being lost from each other in time adds depth to the theme of reunion and rediscovery. The use of dialogue, particularly the exchange between the lovers, adds a personal and intimate touch to the piece.
The concept of a twin flame and the idea of seeking the essence of the beloved beyond the physical form adds a spiritual dimension to the narrative, elevating it beyond a mere love story.
Overall, the writing evokes a sense of yearning, longing, and ultimately, a profound connection that transcends the physical realm. It's a beautiful exploration of love's enduring power.
