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the usual table
they'd agreed to try again -
to give it one more go...
and so he sits here waiting -
of course, she doesn't show...
Published 19th Nov 2015
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19th Nov 2015 2:28am
19th Nov 2015 11:23pm
19th Nov 2015 1:05pm
19th Nov 2015 11:26pm
I don't believe much in second chances, that's how much of a grumpy and old bastard that I am :-)
19th Nov 2015 11:27pm
19th Nov 2015 8:54pm
O....sooo sweetly sad...
She should n e v e r have kept him (you?) waiting....let alone , not showing up at all !
Even in its simplicity, the emotions in this piece are palpable...and deeply felt
A poignant penning, mo chara! xo
She should n e v e r have kept him (you?) waiting....let alone , not showing up at all !
Even in its simplicity, the emotions in this piece are palpable...and deeply felt
A poignant penning, mo chara! xo
19th Nov 2015 11:28pm
Anonymous
19th Nov 2015 9:08pm
I so get this..
Whoever said love is beautiful. .they lied.
Whoever said love is beautiful. .they lied.
19th Nov 2015 11:30pm
