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WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU!?!?
ANSWER...
Feel out of place again-
It's so pathetic when-
I HAVE TO ACT AND PRETEND---
That nothing bothers me-
when in reality,
I'm so-
Overly conscious-
and ready...
I'm ready...
For war....
Feel out of place again-
It's so pathetic when-
I HAVE TO ACT AND PRETEND---
That nothing bothers me-
when in reality,
I'm so-
Overly conscious-
and ready...
I'm ready...
For war....
Published 18th Nov 2015
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18th Nov 2015 11:23pm
Jordan..stop that!!! Lol jeeezuz...honey honey ease ohn down...great piece dollface. Miss the sexymug
Lol
Love
Jennifer
Lol
Love
Jennifer
19th Nov 2015 10:18pm
19th Nov 2015 00:21am
Raging...i can feel the anger..and i like how you displayed your piece...it added alot of emphasis..enjoyed reading
19th Nov 2015 10:19pm
19th Nov 2015 00:44am
*volunteering to collect the bodies..;) eg.
seriously.
lovely use of fierce form & format, misters.. can totally relate to *these kind of days..
personally.. I use the viscous foot stamping [hmpft!] sound.. but your' WTF' soo works! *lmsao.
pen luvz in curtsy,
~d
seriously.
lovely use of fierce form & format, misters.. can totally relate to *these kind of days..
personally.. I use the viscous foot stamping [hmpft!] sound.. but your' WTF' soo works! *lmsao.
pen luvz in curtsy,
~d
19th Nov 2015 10:20pm
I know these days too well dear...thank you for the encouraging words ;)
