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19th Nov 2015 00:06am
Dreams are the gateways to happiness so i was told...either way think big dream far right !!! Nice piece
19th Nov 2015 8:24pm
My reaction, done as a Tanka (Eastern poetry):
In life, one needs to
negotiate, to partition
for the true dreams—
hard-fought, to realized,
to see and live in color.
In life, one needs to
negotiate, to partition
for the true dreams—
hard-fought, to realized,
to see and live in color.
20th Nov 2015 5:23am
I love where you took this piece in so few
words. Very nice and true.
-Howlings
words. Very nice and true.
-Howlings
