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THAT BLEEDING PLAYTHING
Are you having fun?
With that bleeding plaything?
That human heart.
That fits so perfect in this hole in my chest.
I need not ask you be gentle.
You don't listen anyway.
In the system's now.
Dare I speak out of turn.
All these tangled strings.
Suck the venom out if you feel too sober.
Can you differentiate the pendulums chaotic verse?
It's written only for us.
Can you leave all of the ugly eyes,
outside of the car tonight?
When you climb on into the warmth of winter.
Ask forgiveness from the God on the rearview mirror.
With that bleeding plaything?
That human heart.
That fits so perfect in this hole in my chest.
I need not ask you be gentle.
You don't listen anyway.
In the system's now.
Dare I speak out of turn.
All these tangled strings.
Suck the venom out if you feel too sober.
Can you differentiate the pendulums chaotic verse?
It's written only for us.
Can you leave all of the ugly eyes,
outside of the car tonight?
When you climb on into the warmth of winter.
Ask forgiveness from the God on the rearview mirror.
Published 16th Nov 2015
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16th Nov 2015 4:19am
Wow thats a very interesting spin on the heart...love how you alluded to it being a toy...which kindnof signifies how people manage to play with your feelings and emotions like they mean nothing. Not sure if thats what you were intending it to mean but thats what i got from it...and i enjoyed reading it !!
16th Nov 2015 9:06pm
16th Nov 2015 7:39pm
Praisin your chilly pen, sweet man! most accurate scathing and unwavering lines of *bang..
your hard love tones are grasping & relatable in worthy spill..
"Suck the venom out if you feel too sober."
~you stun back amazingly wif this.. luvitt!
"Ask forgiveness from the God on the rearview mirror."
~this beauty bleeds out serenely at end .. *perfect wording..
Title alone means you rock misters JS.. that it's backed by verse & pour is even more fancy..
unholy yes's.. I feel this one-- deeply..;)
much luvin respects m'friend,
~d
your hard love tones are grasping & relatable in worthy spill..
"Suck the venom out if you feel too sober."
~you stun back amazingly wif this.. luvitt!
"Ask forgiveness from the God on the rearview mirror."
~this beauty bleeds out serenely at end .. *perfect wording..
Title alone means you rock misters JS.. that it's backed by verse & pour is even more fancy..
unholy yes's.. I feel this one-- deeply..;)
much luvin respects m'friend,
~d
16th Nov 2015 9:07pm
Thank you for the inspirational comments my friend...you rock the same rhythm;)
